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msspell

What You Wish For

Jun 26, 2007 14:33

What You Wish For
Prompt: lostsquee, Wish
Word count: 100
Characters: Juliet Burke, (mentioned) Benjamin Linus
Rating: G
Disclaimer: This is a fictional, nonprofit work for entertainment purpose only. The copyright in the TV show LOST and its components is owned by "American Broadcast Companies, Inc.", which reserves all rights therein.

( Juliet wanted her ticket back home. )

juliet burke, genre: drama, benjamin linus, fandom: lost, genre: gen

Comments 18

mysticxf June 26 2007, 18:09:59 UTC

I don't know why this made me LOL, but it was just brilliant because I could SEE Juliet's face with that last line. That deadpan look she gets when she's less than impressed.

Awesome, just awesome. ♥

msspell June 26 2007, 18:53:28 UTC

Yeah, that one! I know what you mean! XDDD

Thanks!

uhzoomzip June 26 2007, 19:37:21 UTC

this was lovely - a great snapshot, and funny. :-)

msspell June 26 2007, 23:00:42 UTC

Thanks! :)

slybrunette June 26 2007, 20:23:38 UTC

There's a certain sort of irony here. And I loved that last line. Like everyone else has been saying, I can just see her face so clearly in my mind. You really have a knack with her character you know.

Love this!

msspell June 26 2007, 23:02:19 UTC

Wow, thanks! I value characterization a lot, good to know I'm making it right. :D

gottalovev June 26 2007, 22:14:36 UTC

LOL! awesome. great drabble and imaginative use of the prompt!

msspell June 26 2007, 23:03:46 UTC

Yay, thanks! :)

isis2015 June 26 2007, 22:59:43 UTC

Oh, this is fantastic. Both the irony that this holds for Juliet, and the detatched kind of way she has about her that has her sort of taking it in stride. Wonderful work.

msspell June 26 2007, 23:04:22 UTC

I write so much angst, it was fun to add a laugh to things. Thanks for the feedback! :D