Shock (sugar water)

[msspell]

Shock (sugar water)
Prompt: un_love_you, #15: “This is my desperation in action.”
Rating: PG
Characters: Jack Shephard, Juliet Burke
Timeline: The Man From Tallahassee
Word count: 635
Author's Notes: Stream of thoughts. If it seems confusing, that was the point. :D
Disclaimer: This is a fictional, nonprofit work for entertainment purpose only. The copyright

Comments

[kedda]

I understand I think.

I mean I can follow her train of thought. For the most part. Not so much about the monster.

And then the last part, I can't decide if something is actually happening or if her mind is just going these places. It's the 'Not like this..' thats making me think that it's happening. oh well.

I still lurve it.

[msspell]

It's ok, I myself am not sure. Thanks for liking it anyway. :DDD

(The monster thing was about Ben... now I realize it could apply to Smokey too. Yay for multiple meanings! XD)

[lady_e2484]

Oooooooo i liked this !!

Really different take on what Jules was probably feeling when Locke (the fucking cunt) blew up the sub ......... I like how you turned her into a babbling idiot on the inside and had her keep her calm facade on the outside.

**loves**

[msspell]

Yeah, that's actually something I see a lot in Juliet - the desperate woman behind the ice queen mask. It's one of the things I love in the character.

Thanks! :)