Plans

[msspell]

Plans
Rating: R
Timeline: Season 3
Word count: 1,108
Characters: Jack Shephard, Juliet Burke, Benjamin Linus.
Warning: Sex, adult themes, flashback-y. Spoilers for episode 3x16, “One of Us”. Speculative fic.
Disclaimer: This is a fictional, nonprofit work for entertainment purpose only. The copyright in the TV show LOST and its components is owned

Comments

[iloveisbister15]

i really liked this...the end made my jaw drop to the floor. haha

[msspell]

LOL, thanks - I was sorta aiming for that kind of reaction. ;D

[allibabab]

Lots of really great lines in this, like His hands slid down her body, his lips catch hers. It’s easier than he thought. and He thought it would make her smile. She frowns. I like the way you used the two different parts of the story to move it all forward and compliment each other -- this was well-characterized and really brought out a sense of quiet desperation and loneliness and misunderstanding and manipulation and a whole host of other things.

Great job!

[msspell]

Wow - your review just put my head on the clouds, here. Thank you very much, I'm glad you liked it!

[lady_e2484]

WOW !!!

I look like one of those **MuhGuh** jaw dropping smilies after that ending :D

Amazing stuff loved every word !!

xxxxxxxxxx

[msspell]

Hahahahaha, I love that thing. Careful with your jaw there! ;D

Thanks! ^^

[rosemerry]

*is speechless*

[msspell]

*does the happy dance*

[wildcat9040]

hahahahahaha...ha...juliet deserved that sooo bad!

[msspell]

I'm a sucker for Jack pwning people. He's so damn sexy when he does that. Should do so more often. XD~~

[wildcat9040]

haha, i know right? but then again he's always sexy XD

[msspell]

... You have a point. Damn Foxy. XD~~~~