Underpinning

[mssatellite]

“So, would this be considered our first date?” Lana asks, raising the crystal flute glass to her lips.

Comments

[hotladykisses]

Aww, poor Lana, this is terribly romantic! I do wish it could end well for both of them, because they are both hot and lonely and allergic to long-term relatonships and so cute together! ^^

You did a very convincing job setting up a background to Lana’s obsession with Kalinda, and choosing Lana’s POV for this fic is really interesting, it made me feel all of Lana’s hopes and disapointments... There’s definitely room for more, up to the dinner scene “Why do you like men?” as well as their last encounter (not the easiest to explain from Lana’s POV!), if you feel like getting in Lana’s character again!

Thanks for writing! :-)

[mssatellite]

Thanks for reading!

[sweetjamielee]

This is a really lovely look at the history of Lana's "preoccupation" with a certain mysterious, irresistible investigator. How could a girl NOT become consumed when Kalinda's being so damn... Kalinda?? Keep going, if the block allows you!

[mssatellite]

Thanks. I really enjoyed writing from Lana's view for once. Hopefully the show will give her some more depth.

I'll try to continue. I'm already working on something hopefully I can post it.

[associatedbears]

I've just found this. Fascinating from Lana's POV. I don't know a gay women alive who wouldn't obsess over Kalinda. Hawt!