Seven Days of Rain (3/7?) Part 2

[mslavender]

Title: Seven Days of Rain
Author: mslavender
Characters: AU!France, AU!England, AU!Hungary, AU!Feliciano, AU!Rome
Pairing: FrUK <3
Rating: T
Summary: Seven days of rain, seven days of innocent romance.

Comments

[marinoa]

Ah, I've been waiting for this! Thanks for update!

If constructive criticism is what you want, I fear I'm not able to give it; I find nothing to criticise. The personalities of the characters are written perfectly, very "in-character". I enjoyed the dialogues between France and England, and all in all, I did enjoy the whole chapter. :3 I'm looking forward to the continuation, keep on the good work.

Cheers!

[mslavender]

No no, thank you so much for reading! You don't know how seeing your comments makes me so happy. ;u;

I have always always been a big fan of your work, Marinoa! I'm sorry if it's a little too late to say it. XD To be honest, I didn't have that much confidence with my story at first, but knowing you're enjoying this drives me forward to continue!

Thank you so much for taking the time to read and comment! It really is much appreciated. :D

[marinoa]

Ahaha, thanks! ^_^7

But, do have confidence in your story! It's fluent, interesting and entertaining - and fresh. So, well, I've said it all already, so for now let it only be said: Merry Christmas! XD

[mslavender]

Thank you, I'm very glad you think so. ;u;

It's very late but let me say it anyway. XD Merry Christmas and Happy New Year! \(^_^)/

[ren_chan146]

Very nice chapter. I like how this story is evolving.^^ I feel bad for them both, being pared up with someone you don't like isn't nice but I have hope for them.^^ I can understand Arthur though, somehow Francis manages to rub me the wrong way with almost everything he says, and I'm only a reader. The only reason it doesn't make me explode like Arthur (appart from not being there obviously XD) is that I can read his thoughts and stuff. If I were Arthur though I would have chosen death by frying pan over being nice to him. (I know, I'm pretty short tempered *still working on it* ><)

[mslavender]

Thank you! Ahaha! Yeah, as the writer, sometimes I do get conscious of what Francis does and says, because he can really be offensive sometimes. XD But Francis is Francis and we all do love him... well, most of the time. :p

[sillygrl1990]

Ahaha, their arguing amuses me to no end because I can actually imagine them bickering.. :'D Looks like things are going to get exciting...! Thanks for the update! Your story is so fun to read.

[mslavender]

No, thank you for taking the time to read and comment! ;u;

Haha, that's why I love them! Bickering is just adorable when you know there's a lot of chemistry involved. ;)