Amends - Once Upon a Time (1/1)

[msgenevieve]

Pairing:  Emma Swan/Killian "Hook" Jones (aka Captain Swan)
Rating:   M for Mild Sexy Times
Genre:   Angst, romance, UST, humour
Summary: When she gets the first text from an amused/annoyed store owner one Saturday morning, she thinks nothing of it. He’s done stranger things, after all. But after the second and third message from different sources

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[scribblecat]

Ahhh there's so much to love here.

You were also asking each store owner, and I quote, what kind of bloody stupid establishment won’t take gold coin in payment?”

He scowls at his coffee cup. “Are you quite finished?”

I laughed out loud for an extended amount of time with this. For true. What's a town without a good pirate to rattle the proprietors!

Reading his reaction to the stationary store was fun (why is a stationary store just. so. comfortable?)
and this:

Later, he writes patterns and sonnets on her skin with his fingertips, composing a silent symphony down her spine, skimming poetry down the backs of her legs.

Seriously? I mean c'mon. That was beautiful.

Thankyou for taking the prompt and running with it in a most delightful way! Niiiiiice :)

[msgenevieve]

Sorry my reply is so late! I am seriously posting these stories in so many places these days, it's hard to keep up!

I'm so glad you loved it, and you've picked up some of my favourite bits! Hee!

[alexia_drake]

what kind of bloody stupid establishment won’t take gold coin in payment?”
... this pedestrian writing tool isn’t worthy of the strangely coloured ink that fills it, to say nothing of the poor quality of this parchment.

LOL Poor Hook, and nicely written.

And just like that, the darkness in his eyes is gone, replaced by a flirtatious gleam that makes her toes curl in her boots. “I can think of many a way in which to repay such a generous gesture, Swan.”

Haha, sounds like an appropriate reaction from him :D

Great story. I really hope that Hook will eventually tell Emma why he becamea pirate in the show, so that she understand him more, she needs to know that he's not a typical pirate.

Later, he writes patterns and sonnets on her skin with his fingertips, composing a silent symphony down her spine, skimming poetry down the backs of her legs. When she finally rolls over onto her back, his eyes are glowing brightly in the late afternoon light that filters through the windows above his bed, gleaming with all the unspoken words he’s

[msgenevieve]

Thank you! :)

Great story. I really hope that Hook will eventually tell Emma why he becamea pirate in the show, so that she understand him more, she needs to know that he's not a typical pirate.

Oh, me too. I really, really want her to know all of him. Fingers crossed we get it on the show!