A Time and a Place - Once Upon a Time (1/1)

[msgenevieve]

Title: A Time and a Place
Fandom:Once Upon a Time
Pairing:Emma Swan/Killian "Hook" Jones (aka Captain Swan)
Rating:M for mild secy times
Genre:UST, romance, wee bit of humour
Summary:There’s a time and a place for everything, but when you’re the Savior, it seems finding both those things at the same time can prove more than a little challenging.

Comments

[scribblecat]

Of course it pleased me!
This was great, god you write them so well! And he, well he's just delicious.
“Stealing away in morning’s early light, Swan?” An arm slides around her waist, tugging her backwards against a lean, hard body.
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Two thumbs up!

[msgenevieve]

Awwww, thanks. But seriously, he's such a sarcastic boy, he's so much fun to write and practically writes his own lines, lol!

[alexia_drake]

“Thanks for not dishing up any apples.”
He grins, his eyes gleaming. “Yes, well. I have an inkling you aren’t very fond of that particular fruit.”

lol Good thinking.

Leaning down, he brushes his nose against her temple, his breath warm on her skin. “That would be grand, love,” he mutters, his voice low and rough, “but while I’m on the brink of expiring from deprivation and hunger, it’s not for the bloody food.”

I loved that part, very interesting choice of words.

She knows then that he’s talked to David today, and she should be annoyed that they’re talking about, well, her, behind her back but she can’t seem to summon the required indignation. If anything, it makes her think that maybe her father won’t summon the dwarves for a pickaxe party if he finds out that she and Hook are seeing each other.

That made me smile, and it's nicely written.

Great story :D

[msgenevieve]

Thank you - I love it when people pick out bits of a story that I secretly like too. Hee. And thank you so much for your lovely comments, I'm so sorry that it's taken me a while to reply to them all.