The Right Road - Chapter Nine + Epilogue

Apr 18, 2010 22:08

Title: The Right Road (9/9 + EPILOGUE)
Fandom: Prison Break
Pairing: Michael Scofield/Sara Tancredi
Characters: Michael Scofield, Sara Tancredi, Lincoln Burrows, Veronica Donovan, Frank Tancredi, various original characters
Rating: NC-17
Genre: AU, Non-Epilogue-Compliant, Alternate Reality
Length: 5,630 words
Summary: One single decision can ( Read more... )

alternate reality, michael/sara, happy ending, nc-17, het, the right road, non-epilogue-compliant

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serendipityxxi April 19 2010, 04:17:30 UTC
Oh Gen you know I love this to pieces like all the rest of it! What a gorgeous way to end a fantastic story I love the whimsy you threw in there with the mermaids and the contrast of Sara's hair and the sheets was so clear in my mind's eye! I love Michael and Lincoln's interaction! I loved gettign to see the end of their date from Micahel's POV! The photograph from the wedding made me go awww! I love this verse! I want to live in it! It's fantastic! Well done! :)

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msgenevieve April 19 2010, 10:41:35 UTC
Thank you very much.

This story started with Michael and Lincoln running, and I wanted to end it the same way, only with a little twist.

P.S. I think he likes her in green. *grins*

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sandyk1 April 19 2010, 06:22:40 UTC
Loved it. Loved it all, thank you a million times over.
Now all I have to do is wish really hard for some more IPS some time. Will keep fingers crossed. Thank you again.

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msgenevieve April 19 2010, 10:42:09 UTC
You're very welcome, and thank YOU!

IPS is next on my list, I promise. :)

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lizparker6 April 19 2010, 08:28:23 UTC
Just one single word:

SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!

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msgenevieve April 19 2010, 10:42:33 UTC
Hee! Thank you!

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sticks_for_legs April 19 2010, 09:01:53 UTC
I took me a second to figure out that you'd jumped ahead to the future! Anyway, even after all these years, you still can tug and my heart strings with your characterizations of these characters. I love the way you write their verbal repartee, it's so warm and flirtatious.

I hope you never stop writing this stuff, yep... even when you're, like... 65 and are obsessed with the 13th Doctor or something.

I'm also hoping that some day you'll write first time fic stemming from this universe you created here. Girl can hope, right?

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msgenevieve April 19 2010, 10:47:02 UTC
I'm a tricky one, am I? I wanted to end the story as it had begun, but only this time with added wife and babies and extra happiness. *g*

Thanks so much for the lovely words. It still floors me to think that something I've written might be more than a passing distraction for anyone, so thank you so much.

65, hey? You know that means that 11 and 12 will have to hang around a lot longer than 10 did, lol!

I'm already daydreaming about fics that will fit into this universe, so I think you're pretty safe. *facepalms*

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tinybluefishy April 19 2010, 14:52:35 UTC
Seeing this on my flist was the highlight of my day!

I loved it, and reread the entire story so I could love it some more.

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msgenevieve May 8 2010, 11:45:27 UTC
A big belated thank you! I'm really glad you stuck around to see the ending. *g*

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