The Right Road - Chapter Six

[msgenevieve]

Title: The Right Road (6/?)
Fandom: Prison Break
Pairing: Michael Scofield/Sara Tancredi
Characters: Michael Scofield, Sara Tancredi, Lincoln Burrows, Veronica Donovan, Frank Tancredi, various original characters
Rating: PG-15 (but leaning towards S for Saucy in some places), a small dash of UST
Genre: AU, Non-Epilogue-Compliant, Alternate Reality

Comments

[sunnydust]

THAT WAS QUICK!!! YAY!!!! *runs off to read*

[msgenevieve]

You are awesome. *g*

[purplemoongrl]

When it rains it pours. :)

wishing for a moment he could afford the luxury of a dose of Dutch courage
Was that a shout-out? LOL

Not your usual type, I have to say
My favorite line because that is exactly how I feel about Michael Scofield The Went so that makes identifying with Sara so much easier.

Michael stays in his seat when the groom tosses the bride’s carter to the huddle of single men
As you know I am not a fan of traditions or rituals so I always struggle with fic that involves babies, holidays and especially weddings but in this case it helps because I think Michael feels very out of place, like I do.
So I like this a lot as well:
struck with a healthy dose of second-hand embarrassment, Sara makes a mental note to eradicate this particular event from her own wedding should she ever get marriedI am just happy they are out of there and going for coffee but the dialog and anticipation is fantastic as always

[msgenevieve]

I did think of you when I wrote those words. *g*

Thank you, Mo Mo. I love your little recap reviews, they always make me smile and want to write more. *hugs you*

The RPF will resume once this one is done, I swear. Honest!

[sunnydust]

And now I'm late!!!

Totally loved it!

Sorry I should write a better comment and review because this story is made of awesome!!

[msgenevieve]

Thanks so much - sorry I made you late!

[lizparker6]

Every time i read a new chapter of this, i promise myself to leave a nice long review and point to every detail i loved, later, grumpily, i have to admit to myself that there is no way in hell i am copy/paste-ing the whole thing in the comments...

Let me tell you this though, i love the perfection and lightness with which you master the dialogue as well as exchange of any kind, as well as their private thoughts, so well and skillfully. its like you truly knew them, or maybe its that i like your interpretation of them better and whenever the cannon gave us unsatisfactory insight into them, i fill in the gap with YOUR discription of them.

simply perfect jen. thank you.

[msgenevieve]

You're too kind to me, you know that? Thank you so much.

[bnleah]

Love it! I'm running late for work so I can't leave a long review but this chapter was perfect.

“I went to the bathroom,” she says automatically, then winces. “And I see we’re still over-sharing.”

Out of all the lines I could pull out I had to nab this one because it made me literally laugh out loud. I've been there where you blurt out something embarassing without thinking about it. I once mistakenly told a guy the reason I missed his call was because I was in the bathroom with an upset stomach. Not the best conversation starter as it turned out. LOL.

Great chapter and yayyyy for coffee coming up soon!

[msgenevieve]

Hee, thank you! I seem to have posted this chapter at exactly the time that a whole heap of people in the Northern Hemisphere are rushing out the door to go to work. Ooops!

And? I am very glad I made you LOL. *g*