Social Niceties - Michael, Jane, Lincoln (1/1)

[msgenevieve]

Title: Social Niceties (1/1)
Fandom: Prison Break
Genre: Het
Characters: Michael, Jane, Lincoln
Pairing: Lincoln/Jane, implied Michael/Sara
Length: 1,170 words
Rating: PG-15
Summary:You doubt it’s the first time he’s discovered an unfamiliar woman in his brother’s kitchen. You can't help hoping it's the last time.
Author's Note: Set post-Season

Comments

[danni18]

Loved the idea of Jane being in there after it is all over...very nicely written. Seemed so honest what they said to each other

[msgenevieve]

Thanks so much. I spent most of Season Three hoping for a mention of her, but you know how that went. *clings to denial*

[linzi20]

Oooh, Jane!fic :) Noice.

You do intimate conversations so well. Loved the atmosphere of this. So dense with history.

[msgenevieve]

You calling me dense?

Oh, wait.

*has first coffee of the day*

Thank you, darling. I'm glad you liked it. I tried to keep it simple, but it was originally 200 words. *facepalms*

U rock as usual

[anonymous]

Beautiful, intimate, warm.

Gonna get me a cup of tea now. Never liked coffee much but to read this made me kinda wish I did. Loved Lincoln's concise "Neither", so true to character and the small interactions with Mike were nice too. Loved the "all's well that end's well" reference. I thought it was such a great slap into the company guy's face when he found it in the bagpack.

I am amazed you always find these tiny details and blow them up in your stories. It is one of the (many many) reasons I love to read your stuff because then I remember them too and how much I liked them, even though I only noticed them subconsciously before.

Having said that, when can we expect another update on IPS??? I miss the story like hell and being in a very bad spot right now, emotionally, I could really, really use some stuff to brighten my days. Don't mean to push you though.

Thanks for this beauty, stay safe!!! Love Nika

Re: U rock as usual

[msgenevieve]

Hee! I was really hoping someone would find that 'all's well that ends well' reference. *g*

I've been plotting the next chapter of IPS in my head for weeks now (while RL has been super busy) so hopefully I'll be able to start writing it again soon. Thanks for missing it, and I'm glad you liked this one. :)

[clair_de_lune]

I loved this so much, how their first meeting is both casual and warm, loved the idea of Jane trying to come to term with the situation and of Michael reasonably at peace with it.

“Not a day goes past that I don’t catalogue the deaths I’ve left in my wake,” he says in a quiet, even voice. “But I much prefer to think of the deaths that didn’t happen.”
This is probably the more positive way Michael can think and act about everything that happened.

Last week he wanted to study law.
I'll take this as a reference to Veronica.

Love Linc's short "neither". Although to be honest Lincoln drinking tea would be... I can't really picture him drinking tea ^_^

And you managed to throw in Michael and Jane and some Michael and Lincoln ♥

Thank you, thank you, thank you :)

[msgenevieve]

Yah!

I'm so happy you like it! At midnight last night, it seemed to me that you would, but you know how things seem at midnight, right? LOL.

Yes, the law thing is totally a reference to Veronica. *g*

I like to think of this happening a few months down the track, when they've had a chance to start to come to terms with what happened. Jane's a little behind, but she'll get there.

Happy birthday!!

[sunnydust]

“In other words, all’s well that ends well?”
I *love* your mind !!! *g*

and the whole fic is pure gold and I love it ! I love that they meet without introductions, I loved their honesty, I love the end ! :)

[msgenevieve]

I *love* your mind !!! *g*

LOL. It's not bad when it's working right, I guess. *g*

Thanks for the lovely validation! :P