Secrets (1/1)

Oct 04, 2008 23:12

Title: Secrets (1/1)
Fandom: Prison Break
Characters: Sara Tancredi, Brad Bellick, Michael Scofield
Pairing: Michael/Sara
Length: 1,849 words
Rating: PG-15
Summary: They all made choices that brought them here, and they all have secrets. Spoilers for the whole of Season Four so far.
Author's Note:This is for scribblecat, who requested a certain ( Read more... )

prison break, brad bellick, michael/sara, sara tancredi, pg-15

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linzi20 October 4 2008, 13:43:10 UTC
She thinks of the nightmares, how she wakes up with a scream on her lips almost every night, terrified despite the reassuring weight of Michael’s arm draped around her waist.

I love that you added this bit, because let's face it, we're all holding on to the hope that little things like this are really happening, even if the writers don't have the time or the notion to give it to us.

Great fic darling. Poor Brad. I almost like him.

...the lingering feeling there are more secrets being kept in this warehouse than she could ever imagine.

Exactly. And you demonstrate that more with this little fic than the writers have in all six episodes so far.

You know, I think part of why I like S4 so much is because we have you to fill in the much needed blanks.

*loves this*

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msgenevieve October 4 2008, 13:53:41 UTC
Thank you!

I love that you added this bit, because let's face it, we're all holding on to the hope that little things like this are really happening, even if the writers don't have the time or the notion to give it to us.

*sighs* I know. There are only 45 minutes in which to show us everything they need to show us, and we always end up wanting more. I'm glad you liked it!

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sdwolfpup October 4 2008, 14:00:56 UTC
I really enjoyed this; I'd love to see a moment like it on the show!

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msgenevieve October 4 2008, 14:06:32 UTC
Thanks very much!

I'd love to see a moment like it on the show!

You and me both. Season Four has brought me much joy so far, but also many 'character' plotholes that demand to be filled with fic as soon as humanly possible. Which is good, I guess? LOL.

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lauratnz October 4 2008, 15:05:19 UTC
Oh, this was wonderful. I really needed this. I think I've said that to you on more than one occasion lately, haven't I? I'm beginning to feel seriously indebted here. *g*

Great piece.

Oh, one thing left me intrigued:

“You’re okay now, though, right? You’re not sick or anything like that?”

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msgenevieve October 4 2008, 15:08:36 UTC
LOL. It's my pleasure to be of service. *g*

Oh, one thing left me intrigued: “You’re okay now, though, right? You’re not sick or anything like that?”

Well, he was listening to Michael and Lincoln talking, and thought they were talking about Sara all the time, but perhaps they were talking about someone else at some point. *coughsnosebleedscoughs*

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lauratnz October 4 2008, 15:13:04 UTC
gotcha *g*

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wrldpossibility October 4 2008, 15:27:44 UTC
Ohhh. Thank you. I didn't make that leap either. I thought he had overheard them discussing her mental/emotional state in the wake of Gretchen's damage, but this makes more sense. I'm with ya, now. *g*

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danni18 October 4 2008, 15:22:45 UTC
Love how Bellick comes clean....I doubt that will happen on the show. I also love how sara won't let him take the blame, an also how she hides how she really feels. Nicely written I could hear brad saying this

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msgenevieve October 4 2008, 15:30:38 UTC
I don't think we'll see it either, but that's okay. WE HAVE FIC! Thanks for reading and reviewing! *g*

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wrldpossibility October 4 2008, 15:26:06 UTC
Oh, I love it so much when the past is accounted for in fic. Thank you for giving us this insight into Brad and Sara's relationship at this juncture in the game.

Everyone did indeed make their own choices, and it's fascinating to watch those choices collide.

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msgenevieve October 4 2008, 15:32:20 UTC
Thank you. It was one of those MSN conversations where That Girl We Know said "you know what I'd like to see?" You know the ones, right? LOL.

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wrldpossibility October 4 2008, 19:13:06 UTC
I do indeed. ;)

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