Fresh Air - Michael/Sara (1/1)

[msgenevieve]

Title: Fresh Air (1/1)
Fandom: Prison Break
Characters: Sara Tancredi, Michael Scofield (cameos by several other characters)
Pairing: Michael/Sara
Length: 5,000 words
Rating: R
Summary: Claustrophobia comes in many forms. Spoilers for Season Four, including spoilers and speculation for the upcoming episode, #404, Eagles and Angels.
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[wrldpossibility]

I can't yet decide how I'd like to see the spoilers I've anticipated from 4.04 to be treated, concerning Sara and her reaction to Bruce's death, but if it goes the way you portray here, I think I would be more than alright with that. (Although a police uniform would be a plus, lol.)

I love the idea of Sara needing fresh air and love the fact that Michael provides it even more. And I even liked that they were interrupted.

I've thought a lot about what Sara must feel day-in and day-out being the only woman in the warehouse, and you capture that very well here. Another fic to file away as my personal canon. *g*

[msgenevieve]

Thanks!

To be honest, I can't decide either (I decided not to indulge myself in the police uniform scenario, as tempting as it was) but this is one direction that intrigues me.

I've thought a lot about what Sara must feel day-in and day-out being the only woman in the warehouse, and you capture that very well here.

Does it show that I have four brothers and have mostly shared houses with males? LOL.

[wrldpossibility]

Ha! Yes, I can tell!

[danni18]

Wow, great job. S4 has really inspired you to write. I also think Bruce's death will be why sara ends up in a bar. I liked how Michael found her...very clever of you. I also liked their alone time on the stairs, we are sadly missing some good MiSa time on the show. As always you kept them in character and your story fits in perfectly with all the spoilers we have.

[msgenevieve]

Thanks very much. I can't believe how much I've been writing, and we're only three eps down. Eeep. I'm very much looking forward to #404 and this becoming completely AU, but hey, that's the joy of television! *g*

[lizparker6]

Yes, yes and yes.

More please? *showes a plate into Jen's face asking for a nosh-up*

You know, I could very easily get used to such a frequency of your work. (one, possibly two(?) fics a day...)

Yeah yeah...

Lol, well, until that time comes, I will enjoy as much as you can give. :)

[msgenevieve]

A nosh up? Hee! Thank you so much.

I went to bed last night and thought, "I just wrote three stories in three days," and then I thought of the housework I hadn't done and then I thought, "YAH #404 IS ON SOON!"

LOL.

[tuesdaeschild]

I can really imagine all this happening when I watch the next episode!

It really would be hard for Sara to be living in close proximity to all those men and no way should she be expected to mother Brad Bellick!!

It was very scary when she was followed by the Company guy...okay, it might have been a little naughty of Michael to put that ankle bracelet in her bag but THANK THE LORD THAT HE DID!! And I really loved the time they spent alone on the roof, though it was always pretty much on the cards that they would be interrupted!

I think you might be aware that I'm mostly a slasher and carefully select my diet of Michael/Sara so I'm always pleased when you come up with something because I know it'll be worth reading.

Great job, sweetheart! :)

[katied75]

I love that you are inspired by so much of season 4. Thanks for all the writing... it's making season 4 even more interesting and enjoyable for me.

[msgenevieve]

Thank you!

It really would be hard for Sara to be living in close proximity to all those men and no way should she be expected to mother Brad Bellick!!

Perhaps it was mean for me to pick on Brad but let's face it, he WOULD, wouldn't he?

I think you might be aware that I'm mostly a slasher and carefully select my diet of Michael/Sara so I'm always pleased when you come up with something because I know it'll be worth reading.

*taps nose in sekrit signal*

Yes, I did notice that you liked slash. LOL. Just between you and me, it always gives me a little thrill when you like one of my het stories. *bounces*

[tuesdaeschild]

Perhaps it was mean for me to pick on Brad but let's face it, he WOULD, wouldn't he?

You betcha! :)

*taps nose in sekrit signal*

Bwahahahahahahahaha!! *winks theatrically*

Just between you and me, it always gives me a little thrill when you like one of my het stories. *bounces*

It gives me a thrill too! But you write so well and since it's Michael I'm happy to read your het! :)

Guess I'm a psuedo-slasher then?!!

[purplemoongrl]

Usually when you put up a fic and I am at work I manage to resist it and wait before I get home so I can read in private. Today for some reason I couldn't and I suspect it has something to do with the anticipation for # 4.04 that is slowly killing me, so I though it was a good idea to read it in between customers who kept interrupting much to my annoyance. I guess it is within the interrupting theme of your stories and the show. LOL

[msgenevieve]

Gawd, that icon.

*fans self*

Anyway -

I love that they're talking about the future in every quiet moment they have together in canon. I love that Michael is so very determined that he's not leaving her behind again - EVER - that he does everything he can to make sure she's going to stay.

Thank you so much for braving the wrath of your customers and reading this while you were at work *and* sneaking even more time to let me know what you thought. *hugs you*