India - Chapter 10/10 - aka THE END

Aug 28, 2008 20:56

Title: India - Chapter Ten - THE END
Fandom: Prison Break
Characters: Michael Scofield, Sara Tancredi, various original characters
Pairing: Michael/Sara
Length: 9,594 words
Rating: NC-17
Summary: All good things come to those who wait.
Author's Note:This story is part of the Full Circle series. It takes place between the 'end' and the ' ( Read more... )

au, michael/sara, india, safe house, full circle, nc-17, het

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eight8toes August 28 2008, 11:39:11 UTC
I'm on my way to school, but I decided to check my flist before leaving. Now, do I really have to go? *whines* But I'll be back later to read and comment!

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msgenevieve August 28 2008, 12:11:29 UTC
I timed it just to torment you, my dear. *grins*

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georgiaclaire August 28 2008, 12:33:07 UTC
Do you and Amy have a plot, or something? She taunts me, you taunt Daph? The number of times I've been late for work. Jesus christ.

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msgenevieve August 28 2008, 12:34:11 UTC
We've got both time-zones (northern and southern) covered, you see. *g*

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aboutbefore August 28 2008, 11:41:27 UTC
Oh my, oh my, as if the past 12 hours have not been overwhelming enough when it comes to Michael and Sara. Oh MY. I really honestly, I am feeling overwhelmed and could cry, because obviously I check my age at the door when it comes to this fandom (although I could write an essay about how Michael and Sara are for a mature audience). I CAN NOT EVEN MAKE WORDS. I shall return later when I can. I just want to hug you. And the entire fandom.

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msgenevieve August 28 2008, 12:13:31 UTC
Today had been so eventful, I didn't know whether or not to wait until tomorrow night to post this or not. But it was finished and it had been such a long time in the making, I just needed to get it POSTED. And I got it done before #401, something I didn't hink would happen, lol!

Anyway, I'll stop rambling.

Thank you very much for your kind words. *g*

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wrldpossibility August 28 2008, 14:37:09 UTC
You made the right choice. ;)

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msgenevieve August 28 2008, 12:13:51 UTC
Have a nice lunch! :)

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georgiaclaire August 28 2008, 11:48:14 UTC
*flails helplessly*

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georgiaclaire August 28 2008, 12:05:29 UTC
You know, looking back on the last four comments, this probably wasn't the moment or time to post this if you wanted actual feedback. *laughs aloud*

Ah, well, it's a great big lovefest today. I'm gonna go hug my brother or something, weird him out completely. :)

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msgenevieve August 28 2008, 12:15:18 UTC
That is quite alright. I'm a little commented-out myself this evening, lol! Helpless flailing works very nicely for me, trust me.

Don't shock your brother too much. *g*

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scribblecat August 28 2008, 12:04:57 UTC
Okay I'm crying here.
Grinning, Michael watches them, his heart suddenly feeling too big for his chest. This is your life, he reminds himself, just as he does at least once a day.

What can I say, it brought on the waterworks. I thought I'd find this chapter harder to comment on because I've known the twists and plot for a year and thought I already knew the surprises, but this little scene choked me up and summarised what this whole Full Circle series was about. Michael, our canon 'hero' making a life for himself with the woman and the family he loves around him. The simplicity of that, with the complexity of a little thing called plot and the way you write these characters has made this whole series so enjoyable to read. Thankyou. *hugs*

P.S Thanks for putting up with my 'helpful suggestions'.

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msgenevieve August 28 2008, 12:17:53 UTC
I made you cry? Seriously?

Awwww.

*hugs you*

I didn't think you'd be surprised by anything in this chapter either, considering you've known all the secret twists and turns for a long time, lol! Maybe all those rough notes weren't enough to prepare you for the finished product, or maybe you're still on an M/S high from earlier today. Either way, I'll take the high praise and say THANK YOU for all your help and nagging (even though it makes me cranky sometimes) and the pretty matching icons. :)

*hugs you again*

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