Disclosure - Michael/Sara, Lincoln/Jane

[msgenevieve]

Title: Disclosure (1/1)
Pairing: Michael/Sara, Lincoln/Jane
Genre: AU!alternate universe, mention of femslash, het
Length: 2,521 words
Rating: I'm not sure. Perhaps "R"?
Summary:Secrets are made to be found out with time.
Author's Note:For happywriter06, with much love on the (belated) occasion of her birthday. This little story is a sequel to my Sara/Jane

Comments

[burntcircles]

I'm not an expert on guys (heheh) but I think that even the inscrutable Michael Scofield will react to the Big Revelation the same way as the average guy: he'll be super-massively turned on. *g*

So strange though that after reading this I get to see pics of WMIII carrying pillows, large keys, and handcuffs.

*thinks*

[msgenevieve]

Well, that was the reasoning I was going with, too.

So strange though that after reading this I get to see pics of WMIII carrying pillows, large keys, and handcuffs.

Until we found out they were a gift from a fan who caught up with him outside Starbucks, I was trying to convince sarah_scribbles he'd bought them as a 'welcome back to the set' joke present for a certain BFF of his. Bwah!

[burntcircles]

he'd bought them as a 'welcome back to the set' joke present for a certain BFF of his

That's a nice thought! *g* And the humongous keys--it's like saying THEKEYTHEKEYTHEKEYTHEKEY! Heh.

Just imagine him laying his head on that pillow. Awww.

I can see him coming home to his apartment and yelling, "Hey Sarah, look what this sweet fan gave me. You wanna break them in?"

[msgenevieve]

And the humongous keys--it's like saying THEKEYTHEKEYTHEKEYTHEKEY!

"Let's see how this one looks on you."

[scribblecat]

Oops indeed! Well that could have been a lot more awkward but you still managed to have the canon characters deal with it in a canon type of way, though it's got the AU tangent (much to Linc's dissapointment I'm sure).
Did that make sense? It's late. I realy liked the angst between Michael and Sara there. The body language was fantastic throughout.

[msgenevieve]

Thank you. You know me and that pesky characterisation. Even in an AU!AU, I have to try to get it right. *pokes brain*

[linzi20]

I am certainly not reading this at work. How dare you tempt me Jen!! *pouts*

I won't even read the other comments. *hides eyes and runs away*

*tiptoes back* Psst, I'll read it later and comment with something ridiculously intelligent. Promise.

[msgenevieve]

*smirks*

It's not that naughty, honestly. It's more talking than doing, really.

I look forward to your ridiculously intelligent comment. *g*

[linzi20]

Heh, okay, you were right, it wasn't that naughty. Very nicely handled my dear. I really would like to say something ridiculously intelligent, but I'm afraid mushy brain has already set in for the night. I'll *flail* and *squee* though, if that's all right?

[msgenevieve]

Thank you, darling. My brain's a bit mushy this morning too.

[rosie_spleen]

Hello.

There are lots of serious things I like about this and, as always, it is very beautifully written.

It's interesting, because it is almost a mirror situation. Initially, I suspected Linc would be rapt with the revelation and respond very energetically. It was a nice touch to have him tempered and moderate, only to become responsive at the car.

The main element I loved about this was Jane and Sara's reactions. There was a calmness and patience about the fic, but both women almost had a melancholic response to the news being 'out'. There were sad aspects to the fic, which were surprising: Jane's deceased family, Sara's sense of loss, souls looking for affection. Nicely balanced at the end by some mirth and merriment.

Well done and thanks.

[msgenevieve]

Thank you so much.

I start these things with the mindset of "right, birthday fic, something light and amusing' and then all thise stuff comes into my head and the 500 ficlet turns into a one-shot with aspirations of plot and character exploration. I never learn, lol!

It's hard to write about cliches without writing them, if you know what I mean, and I'm so glad you saw something deeper than just boys going "Ooooh!" *g*

[sunnydust]

Gosh !! I think you have keep them so greatly in character !!
Damn you are such a good writer !!! I would quote which lines I liked best (thing that I usually do) but honestly can't 'cause I LOVED every single word !!

She's backkkkk !!! EEeeeeeeeeeee !!lol I'm so not over it !!! hihi !

Michael is too cute ! And loved the icon 'Oops' you're right, so right for this story !!!

take care
xxx

[msgenevieve]

Thank you so much!

And yes, she's back. I never get tired of typing those words. Hee!