Epiphany - Lincoln/Veronica (NC-17)

[msgenevieve]

Title: Epiphany (1/3)
Fandom: Prison Break
Characters/Pairing: Lincoln Burrows/Veronica Donovan, Michael Scofield
Genre: Het, pre-series
Length: 3,380 words
Rating: NC-17
Summary:That's the problem with epiphanies; you never know when to expect them.
Author's Note:For domfangirl, who really wanted some Lincoln/Veronica that she didn't have to write

Comments

[darkwriter69]

Oh Jen, that was perfect! I loved seeing this scene through Linc's eyes. It was very poignant how he realised he missed her.

He’s never taken fashion advice from someone who insists on wearing a baseball cap with everything, and he sees no reason to start

OMG, this line just had me in stitches girly!

Candy is going to love this fic. Hurry up and write the second part.

[msgenevieve]

Glad you're enjoying it!

OMG, this line just had me in stitches girly!

Heh. Thanks. It's Michael's own fault, of course.

[scribblecat]

You are quite hilarious you know that? Nice balance of serious issues and funny lines and aww Michael. I hope he finds that blonde again.
Poor Veronica, dealing with that and on a boiling hot day wearing that huge robe. The whole time I was wondering when she will get to take it off to cool down. They wear clothes under them right?
Happy Birthday to Domfangirl!

[msgenevieve]

Yes, they wear clothes under their gowns. Well, they're supposed to, anyway, lol!

Happy you liked, and I don't know about being hilarious, but I'll take it. *g* Thanks, matey.

[sk56]

Yes, but what kind of clothes do they wear. A friend of mine is a judge in Hawaii, where he wears shorts under his robes.

[msgenevieve]

Heh. I think that Veronica will be wearing a sensible but sexy skirt and blouse. *g*

[daisydisy]

My my you've been a busy little vegemite haven't you? All these fics-where do you find the time?

I have said it before and I'll say it again-I would read the fine print on a loans document if I thought you had written it.

The quality of your writing never changes, no matter what you turn your hand to. The characters are always written true to form and you always set the mood beautifully. Looking forward to the rest.

[msgenevieve]

You're too kind to me, you know.

I have no idea where I'm finding the time, hence this being split into a two chapter story rather than one long one that will take me all week to finish, lol!

[purplemoongrl]

You know that I am conflicted about Linc. It alternates from feeling love to want to strangle him. 'Your Linc' however is made of awesome and IMO how he was intended to be. It is amazing how you can breath live into all these characters and not only Michael and Sara.

OMG, Jen I love this fic on so many levels. The brotherly love and relationship that you always write so well, the love between Vee and Linc, the sibling thing between Vee and Michael, the blond hitting on Michael LOL, the tragedy of Vee's homelive and the fact that she was determent to make something good of her live in spite of that.

Feeling outmaneuvered on two fronts, he gives up, knowing that objecting would only be fighting a losing battle

“Hey Ronnie, want me to take a picture of you with your family?"

With these two lines you really said it all IMO.

He’s never taken fashion advice from someone who insists on wearing a baseball cap with everything, and he sees no reason to start now

Brilliant!!!LOL

Happy Birthday domfangirl

[msgenevieve]

Yes, I do know how you feel about him. I have the same issues with Lincoln, but they tend to lessen when I'm actually writing him and getting inside his head.

The brotherly love and relationship that you always write so well, the love between Vee and Linc, the sibling thing between Vee and Michael, the blond hitting on Michael LOL, the tragedy of Vee's homelive and the fact that she was determent to make something good of her live in spite of that.

Eeeeep. I am, as always after reading your comments, feeling all sheepish and 'um okay', lol! I'm so glad you like how I deal with the other characters, because although Michael/Sara pretty much consumes me, I really enjoy writing the others.

[rosie_spleen]

okay, so there's a Journey CD on in the car? Well, that's a great start. I also love that you see this from Lincoln's perspective. I didn't expect that - how unpredictable you are ; )

The interaction between Lincoln and Thomas Donovan is amazingly written. The passage where Thomas says:

“You hang out with losers long enough and you’ll never be anything but a loser. Best thing you ever did was to dump this one’s ass.”

is really telling, and is enough to make me want to throttle her father, let alone Lincoln. Your Lincoln is very likable, unlike the way canon has made him into a machine who stays with a baby girl rather than his brother at the end 3.13

Great chapter and writing. Looking forward to reading the next.

[msgenevieve]

Awww, thank you.

The Journey CD is actually playing in Lincoln's apartment while they're having pizza, but if they'd drived to Waco, you can bet he would have inflicted it on Michael in the car as well.

I also love that you see this from Lincoln's perspective. I didn't expect that - how unpredictable you are

I guess you were expecting Vee's POV, then? I did consider that, but seeing as Lincoln is the one who famously 'pushed everyone away', I thought it would be intriguing to see this from his POV.

Your Lincoln is very likable, unlike the way canon has made him into a machine who stays with a baby girl rather than his brother at the end 3.13

You know, I have no problem with Lincoln staying behind to be with LJ, because if I were him, I wouldn't let LJ out of my sight again until he was thirty. But yes, the Sofia thing stucks in my craw quite badly, as the saying goes.

[rosie_spleen]

The Journey CD is actually playing in Lincoln's apartment while they're having pizza

See, I didn't really read, just wanted to see my name in your journal and pretend I liked your fic
lol - me lack comprehension.

But yes, the Sofia thing stucks in my craw quite badly, as the saying goes.

Gosh! Could you imagine having Sofia sticking in your craw? I think you would need a LOT of reconstructive surgery.

Also, imagine if she was stuck in your (Maxwell Smart-like) claw? "The craw, the craw". I reckon Lil Soph stuck anywhere would be a right pain in the arse due to the plastic she wears about her acting

I still liked the chapter, even if I didn't understand the Journey.

[msgenevieve]

You are v.funny.