Awkward - Michael/Sara (1/1)

Mar 02, 2008 15:02

Title: Awkward (1/1)
Fandom: Prison Break
Characters: Michael/Sara
Genre: Alternate Universe, ficlet
Length: 323 words
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Some things are easier left unexplained.
Author's Note:For bnleah's birthday, because she is a sweetheart and needs as many fics to read as possible. You asked for snow, my dear, and I promise it makes a cameo ( Read more... )

prison break, au, michael/sara

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tuesdaeschild March 2 2008, 15:37:07 UTC
That was sooo pretty, despite the awkwardness. It definitely qualifies as a warm and fuzzy moment! *sighs contentedly*

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msgenevieve March 4 2008, 12:35:37 UTC
Thank you, you lovely girl. I so enjoy writing these two in an established relationship, because I think they'll never stop enjoying finding out things about each other. *g*

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tuesdaeschild March 4 2008, 18:28:33 UTC
You're welcome, my sweet. These two really do make a lovely couple and always will and writing about them finding out things about each other could be a lifetime's work! I can think of worse ways of spending your working life! ;)

*hugs*

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pluschi March 2 2008, 23:01:09 UTC
Aah *contented sigh* This reads like a warm cup of hot chocolate on a cold winter day. It snuggles up in just the right places.

I'm always in awe in how you can create a storyline, leaving just enough unsaid and hanging in the air for the reader to continue the story and still say so much in so little words. I wish I had that ability *big sigh* But I don't, so I'm glad you do... it's like I'm visiting to drink all your hot choco, hehe *naughty smile*

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msgenevieve March 4 2008, 12:41:18 UTC
I don't know what I did before you started leaving your wonderful feedback on my writing. *hugs you* Thank you so much.

I always enjoy writing a tiny snapshot of a larger story-yet-to-be-written, and these two never fail to inspire me. :)

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pluschi March 4 2008, 20:59:38 UTC
*hugs you back* You're absolutely welcome, it just cheers my day - and lately, they really need some cheering. So we're really like an interdependant duo *grins*

Owww - a tiny snapshot of a larger story-yet-to-be-written- that sounds like yaaaaaaayyyyyyyyyy *loud cheering*

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eight8toes March 3 2008, 05:32:11 UTC
*grins*

March is now my favorite month, LOL.

I loved it. I love long fics, but i also love little snippets. Although it does leave me wanting more.

So, someone's been a busy writer lately, huh?

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msgenevieve March 4 2008, 12:39:15 UTC
Ha!

Thank you. March looks like being quite busy. *g*

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xshorty24x March 3 2008, 10:13:01 UTC
Hee! So perfect. It's amazing how you can create this little universe in just a few words. And (I think you know) I love fics with pregnant!Sara, so reading something that involves Michael and Sara talking about getting pregnant? GAH!

*coughithinkweneedafollowuptothiscough*

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msgenevieve March 4 2008, 12:38:39 UTC
*blushes* Thank you!

Follow up? *g* I'll see what I can do.

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ladykaru March 3 2008, 13:01:47 UTC
Oh, the non-embarassament... This was too cute.

And your icon? *lol*

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msgenevieve March 4 2008, 12:37:26 UTC
Love that embarrassed icon. :) I'm happy you enjoyed!

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