India - Michael/Sara (Chapter Four)

[msgenevieve]

Title: India - Chapter Four
Fandom: Prison Break
Characters: Michael Scofield, Sara Tancredi
Pairing: Michael/Sara
Length: 2,671 words
Rating: PG-15 for some adult themes. *coughs*
Summary: All good things come to those who wait.
Author's Note:This story is part of the Full Circle series. It takes place between the 'end' and the 'epilogue' of

Comments

[wrldpossibility]

Ah, woman, you have no idea how pleased I am when I wake up and have a brand new India chapter to read with my morning coffee! And you're enjoying teasing us with Michael's proposal, aren't you...just dangling that carrot...it's great.

I loved getting inside Sara's head regarding her addiction (I always love hearing everyone's take on how that came about) and love that the humanitarian award ended up in the disposal. You have built such a soft, graceful connection, such a partnership, between Michael and Sara that it's a joy to read. The term "fluff" is one I hate in general (maybe even more than PWP, lol), and it definitely doesn't describe the scenes you've written here. Maybe "depth" is better.

Either way, thanks for the read!

[msgenevieve]

And you're enjoying teasing us with Michael's proposal, aren't you...just dangling that carrot...it's great.

Hee. I almost feel as though I'm messing with Sara's head, because I know something she doesn't know. *is a freak*

You have built such a soft, graceful connection, such a partnership, between Michael and Sara that it's a joy to read.

Thank you so much. One year on, they've forged quite a connection, but there's still new things to be learned, I think. But yes, I like to think that they are still working hard to make their relationship everything it could be.

I'll definitely take depth over fluff, thank you! *g*

[recycledfaery]

Another great chapter. There's so much I like about it I just cannot take one thing.

Sarah's history, Michael's should I, should I not and the humor between them. They're starting to have a proper relationship. I like that.

[msgenevieve]

Oh, that icon. *loves*

I'm so pleased you're still enjoying the story, and yes, they've got a 'normal' relationship now and it makes me love writing them even more, lol! *is hopeless when it comes to these two*

[msgenevieve]

Thanks! They've been living together for a year at this stage, so they're definitely comfortable with each other now. I'm glad it's ringing true for you.

[tinybluefishy]

This fic is turning in one of my favorites, I squeed when I saw it had been updated and have savoured reading it this morning!

I love the relationship between Michael and Sara, its little quirks and humour as well as its depth and obvious love. I love the parallels you draw between the London hotel room and the first room the stay in, it shows the progression of their relationship in a wonderful unobvious way.

I love this fic and can't wait for the next chap, you make my day bright today, so thank you!

[msgenevieve]

Aw, thank you!

I'm just keeping in my head that it's a year down the track. They're very comfortable with each other, but they're still learning things about each other too. I like making them acknowledge their shared past and talk about it openly, making those quiet jokes that couples do. Glad you're enjoying it!

[linzi20]

Thank you dahling. That was lovely. *smooches*

[msgenevieve]

Thank you! It still feels weird to be writing such short chapters, lol!