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msgenevieve

Secret - Michael/Sara

Aug 08, 2007 09:04

Title:Secret
Fandom: Prison Break
Rating:G
Genre: Het
Summary:You can't control what lies beneath the surface.
Characters:Michael Scofield/Sara Tancredi
Length: 200 words
Author's Notes:Written for the amazing sk56's birthday with much love and many thanks that she's been my friend for all these years. I hope you enjoy the 'theme' of your birthday ( Read more... )

sk56 birthday, prison break, michael/sara, g

Comments 31

xshorty24x August 8 2007, 00:13:55 UTC

Aw, how lovely! I adore the connection you've made between both scenarios. The ballet is admittedly beautiful, but cleary, simply holding Michael Scofield's wrist and feeling his heartbeat beneath your own hand would be at least ten times better. Hee!

msgenevieve August 8 2007, 00:17:56 UTC

Thank you!

Hmmm, I don't think my writing is as clear as it could be - this is when she's listening to his heartbeat (through her stethescope) with her other hand on his chest, rather than holding his wrist. Do I need to elaborate a bit more, do you think? *worries*

xshorty24x August 8 2007, 02:03:56 UTC

*headdesk*

Your writing is very clear, so don't you dare worry about that! I had just woken up when I first read this and clearly my brain hadn't caught up with me at that point. *is embarrassed*

I think I should just stop commenting on your LJ, cause I keep making a fool of myself LOL.

msgenevieve August 8 2007, 02:11:38 UTC

I think I should just stop commenting on your LJ, cause I keep making a fool of myself LOL.

*clings*

No no no no no.

*clings some more*

I wrote this when I first work up, and I'm home sick and rattling with cold medication, so you're not the only one peering at the screen, lol!

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sk56 August 8 2007, 04:34:33 UTC

Their feet work furiously, almost silently, belying the smooth calm above.

That's it, in a nutshell.

I am a very lucky, and very grateful girl. Many, many thanks!

msgenevieve August 8 2007, 07:02:47 UTC

If I was close enough to bake you a cake, I would, but since I'm not and I can't, this is the best I can do. *hugs you*

sk56 August 9 2007, 07:35:05 UTC

Oh, but this is much better than cake, well, I made a cake, and so don't need one right now, but am always happy for something to read...

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msgenevieve August 9 2007, 02:57:11 UTC

Thanks. I have so many conflicting ideas about what her childhood was like, I don't like committing to just one - I tend to try out different ones with every new story.

aliasledger August 9 2007, 15:06:53 UTC

This was beautiful.
I am speechless.
=)

msgenevieve August 11 2007, 04:06:04 UTC

Thank you!

heartagram_lala August 9 2007, 18:13:21 UTC

i love it.

msgenevieve August 11 2007, 04:06:28 UTC

Aww, thanks!