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msgenevieve

Compromise - Michael, Lincoln

Jul 31, 2007 23:35

Title: Compromise (1/1)
Fandom: Prison Break
Characters: Michael Scofield, Lincoln Burrows
Length: 400 words
Rating: PG-15 for language
Summary: Planning can only take you so far.
Author's Note:This is a long overdue 'drabble' for the wonderful ms_artisan as a thank you for my beautiful OTP header. She wanted Michael and Lincoln having an argument, any ( Read more... )

michael scofield, prison break, pg-15, lincoln burrows, gen

Comments 16

bijoux83 July 31 2007, 14:15:04 UTC

This is by far my favorite line.

He draws himself up, indignant. “I never said you didn’t.”

It's so childish, but boys will be boys. Like I have the right to mock. Anytime my sister and I argue our collective mental age drops to 8.

msgenevieve August 2 2007, 11:24:15 UTC

Thanks!

It's so childish, but boys will be boys. Like I have the right to mock. Anytime my sister and I argue our collective mental age drops to 8.

Oh, yes. This is Michael, the man who says likes like 'rock paper scissors' and 'take that back' as soon as he's with his brother. *loves him*

recycledfaery July 31 2007, 14:25:35 UTC

Anyone with siblings will definitely recognise this. It is so good. No matter how old we get, when we have arguments, we revert to our childhood roles.

Loves it. *gives you a GOLD star* LOL

msgenevieve August 2 2007, 11:25:11 UTC

Thank you! It's always enjoyable to write these two, particularly when they're niggling at each other.

cynaera August 1 2007, 01:14:02 UTC

I don't even watch PB anymore, but this had me swallowing a lump of tears. You do the drabble so well, m'dear! (Haven't we done this conversation with LFN, too?) *evil giggle*

msgenevieve August 2 2007, 11:25:50 UTC

Awwww, thanks!

scribblecat August 1 2007, 01:21:17 UTC

Ooh I do like! And I see you've gone for something different with first person. Works well!
Nice squabble, a very 'Michael and Linc' type of tiff, that never stays around for long :)

Oh and that quote was perfection. I think the show should have stolen that and stuck it on their posters.

scribblecat August 1 2007, 03:28:00 UTC

Woops, second person.
In his brain and on his brain, tricksy!

msgenevieve August 2 2007, 11:26:43 UTC

There, there. *pats you*

I'm glad you approve!

xshorty24x August 1 2007, 10:16:12 UTC

I read this earlier today but had to run off to uni, so I didn't get a chance to comment. But this was a really marvellous drabble! You pegged the brother's and their relationship so well, and gah. I love it.

msgenevieve August 2 2007, 11:28:52 UTC

Thank you! Their relationship is so clearly defined on screen, it's almost cheating writing things like this, I swear. *g*