How many ways are there to spell HOT? I mean seriously wow! WOW!!!! And besides the epic smut, I love that he built her a boat. I could so see that. Thank you for this fabulous happy ending!
Thanx, it was a pleasure to write something light and fluffy (and epically smutty, heh) with all the angst these two have had heaped on them these past four years
He built her a boat! (Can I call sloop a boat? ) And for such a special occasion indeed. :) And Laura considers ice cold water lovely. Right. They have a cabin, they have a boat, why do I have a feeling that Laura is going to get them a dog next? Got off topic, sorry. Anyway, I really liked the ending. And the beginning. And the rest of the story. :)
Heh, I think Laura considers teasing Bill = lovely & yeah, I think you can call a sloop a boat, I'm no expert though. Isn't it just great to be thinking of them in their cabin, instead of the angst they'll have to go through in just a few weeks time? And yeah, heh, with a dog too, though what breed would you reckon she gets them??
Oh my God, this was perfect! This is everything I wanted and more. You have just a LOVELY writing style here, and your vivid descriptions, characterizations - they are all very, very well done. What a beautiful (and SEXY) Christmas present. It was both romantic and hot, all at the same time, and the ending was perfect.
Just got back and saw there was a mix up and this was really zaleti's prompt. Sorry about that, I had no idea but maybe you guys can share? (Hmm A/R foursome , smutty thoughts begone)
I am really glad you liked the story though, Bill and Laura and Happy Earth, I get a feeling maybe when the series ends I'll have to go and visit with them there until my heart is unbroken
I love that you loved, thanks for the feedback, I really liked the thought that he built her a boat and all the fiddling with his model ship (and it getting broken so anviliciously time and again) was just practise for the real thing
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*needs reviving*
I am actually dead right now, so no coherent thoughts are coming into my brain.
Just....WOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOW! That was absolutely AMAZING. talkofcake is super lucky!
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Thank you soo, so much!
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I am really glad you liked the story though, Bill and Laura and Happy Earth, I get a feeling maybe when the series ends I'll have to go and visit with them there until my heart is unbroken
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