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The Uninvited Chapter 14

Mar 08, 2010 00:10

Title: The Uninvited
Author: msbenzedrine
Pairing: Ryden
Rating: PG13
POV: 3rd
Summary: (high school AU) Brendon’s life took a huge turn when he found himself suddenly living with his rich new guardian and her family in a mansion Brendon thought only existed in TV shows after his foster mom died. Living in luxury would be fine or much peaceful if it wasn’t ( Read more... )

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FC! wuzzah! deadoralive0013 March 7 2010, 17:42:11 UTC

If not on SATD... here! I vowed to get FC one day and wuzzah! Here it it. :D

As I've said nice chapter.

Re: FC! wuzzah! deadoralive0013 March 7 2010, 17:47:46 UTC

And the changes are awesome. I LOVE Dustin. XD

Re: FC! wuzzah! msbenzedrine March 8 2010, 10:14:59 UTC

Haha Dustin. :))

mitchiemarie March 8 2010, 23:48:36 UTC

:D
I love this, and I'm squeeing with joy because you updated!!
^__^
I love Dustin <33 He's so adorable!
Too bad he has Amber for a sister.
>.<
xD I'm glad that Brendon didn't end up choking on Ryan's 'member'
;) That would've been one for the newspapers!
I can't wait until Brendon dumps Amber. Really, I can't.

msbenzedrine March 10 2010, 10:36:05 UTC

Wahaha. Writing that *ehem* part was realllllllly awkward for me. I was making faces while writing it since it was the first time I tried writing it.

And yeah, at first I was planning to have Dustin as a little brat (an annoying one) but I changed plans.

Oh, dumping Amber wouldn't be that easy, even if Bden wanted to. Just wait for the update sometime next month. Haha.

xteam_randyx March 8 2010, 23:59:42 UTC

WOOHOO!!!! That was amazing as always. I laughed so hard when I read what Brendon said about bunnies. Still laughing. Can't wait for more.

msbenzedrine March 10 2010, 10:38:14 UTC

At first I thought it was ridiculous but yeah, it's funny. At least for us. :))

Thanks!!

xbeautyxkillerx March 9 2010, 00:04:00 UTC

Ahhhhhhhhh <3
I love this fic so much.
Brendon finally broke it off with amber, thank GOD.
Err, Dustin is really creepy o_O
RYDEN SMUT FTW

msbenzedrine March 10 2010, 11:59:37 UTC

Haha, Dustin. Yeah, creepy little boy.

Brendon hasn't broke up with her but I THINK he's already decided on telling her that they should end their relationship. Hmm... we'll get to that in the next chapter.

eastdisease March 9 2010, 00:18:15 UTC

Awww. Good chapter. Still don't particularly like the way Brendon thinks everything's gonna work out or something. Oh well.

msbenzedrine March 10 2010, 12:15:05 UTC

Ow, but he won't try to work things out already.
Ah, you should see the next chapter... which is still in my head. I'll be writing as soon as possible. After I've finished defending my machine problem. T_T