The Uninvited chapter 15

[msbenzedrine]

Title: The Uninvited
Author: msbenzedrine
Pairing: Ryden
Rating: PG13
POV: 3rd
Summary: (high school AU) Brendon’s life took a huge turn when he found himself suddenly living with his rich new guardian and her family in a mansion Brendon thought only existed in TV shows after his foster mom died. Living in luxury would be fine or much peaceful if it wasn’t

Comments

[n3g4r]

wow! I'm really sad right now because you can't end the chapter here:(
I'm waiting for the next one, hoping you will update soon:D
By the way the part where where Brendon almost says I love you to Ryan on the phone was my favorite:D

[msbenzedrine]

Wah, sorry. I will update soon, I'm on vacation. :D

Yeah, I just had to put that 'almost-say-i-love-you' part. Thanks!! :D

[xbeautyxkillerx]

i kind of exploded when i saw you'd updated, hah.
this chapter made me really sad. Poor Brendon. Poor Ryan. Poor Jon. Poor Amber.
Pshhh, fuck Matt.
can't wait for more :]

[msbenzedrine]

Whoa thanks! I really wanted this chapter to be somehow sad and kinda intense, so yeah.
Yeah, fuck Matt.

And yeah, will update soon. Maybe next week. :D

[thenewcancer13]

Oh my god!
My heart was beating so fast during this whole chapter.
Poor Brendon!
I'm glad he isn't getting back with Amber though.
This was amazing, as always.
Can't wait to read more! :)

[msbenzedrine]

Yah, I know. I was having second thoughts on how Matt will make Brendon agree. But yes, Brendon doesn't want to get back with her. Even if it costs him his arm? Oh love.

Thanks!

[mitchiemarie]

:0
I hate amber.
and matt.
I feel bad for Ryan <\3
oh brendon!
D:
I:
I Scared to see what happens next
:'(

[msbenzedrine]

Owh don't cry. :D

Ryan will go, and rescue Brendon somehow.

Thanks! Now I'm excited to write the next chapter. Heehee.

[xteam_randyx]

*explodes* oh. My. God. That was intense. Really. Amazing. Awesome. Poor Brendon. Falling for Matt's tricks again. Poor Ryan. All confused. Brendon really should tell him stuff. Because if he told Ryan, Ryan would tell Pete and Pete would beat them up. Then they wouldn't be in this mess. Wait is Pete the guy that's coming? I hope so. That would be so freakin cool. Have no fear! Pete is here!!!! *theme song*

[msbenzedrine]

Wait is Pete the guy that's coming?

Hahahahahahahahaha!! Nice guess! But we'll have to wait for the next chapter. And yeah, I had to be a little pitiless on this chapter but it is needed, necessary. :D

Have no fear! Pete is here!!!!
Still laughing about this.

[xteam_randyx]

Yeah. Can't you imagine that? Pete. In tights. *eyebrow waggle*

[msbenzedrine]

Now that you've mentioned the tights, haha.