Your Secret Admirer - Part V

Mar 05, 2010 15:58



Your Secret Admirer    (sister story to  My Public Enemy)
Long One shot, seperated into parts
Romance, Drama, AU

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fanfics, yunjae, your secret admirer

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moon1084 March 5 2010, 10:35:45 UTC
first???? gaaaaaaaaaaah i was so dying for you to write a yunho's pov. i wasn't sure if you mentioned you were going to do one or not. But damn that yunho. he had us readers fooled to thinking they did something that night. But it was a innocent white lie. i am glad he did it. this was sooo uberly cute. i loooved it. all of yunho's thoughts were so innocent and sweet. he was totally in love with his jaejoong.

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ms_ravishing March 6 2010, 02:35:51 UTC
Yeah you are first! :D
and that's the surprise for you readers!
I'm glad you like it... THX!

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unknowntibidip March 5 2010, 10:43:27 UTC
MINE ♥
Oh gosh, ikdfhijmgnjh !!! >.<
You don't know how happy I am to see that you finally posted Yunho's part! (I loved so much the first part with JJ' pov *.*)
I'm having a f****** bad day (and it's only 11:42 am here), and you totally made my day with this! *dances happily and hugs you till you can't breathe*
Anyway, I'll be back later with my comment ^o^♥

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unknowntibidip March 5 2010, 13:47:11 UTC
Wah~ Yunho fooled us ALL XD I thought they did it (even if Jae didn't remember anything) LOL
Anyway, that was nice to read Yunho's pov, it makes us see the story in two different ways and I like it. I loved to read how Yunho realized slowly that he truly had a crush (and lots more...) on Jaejoong - his hyung's friend - and how he tried to fight against his feelings. And that was really cute when he never answered what he really thoughts, but the contrary ^^"
*sigh* I loved it! Thanks for writing such a sweet story ♥

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ms_ravishing March 6 2010, 02:43:53 UTC
I'm happy!! To know that my story can make you feel happy :D
*gives u a hug back*

And surprised with the hoax? hehe, i almost cancel the hoax, but now I'm glad I didn't
and thank you for reading...

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unknowntibidip March 6 2010, 19:42:50 UTC
Yep I was surprise, I really wasn't expecting this at all xD And I'm happy that you didn't decide to cancel it, it makes it better imo.
Besides, I love that kind of plots, and not too fluffy stories, so I hope you'll write more stories like this one ♥

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chloe1910 March 5 2010, 11:01:47 UTC
ROFLMAO...oh gosh, this is truly adorable♥ I'm so glad that things are working out for them!!

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ms_ravishing March 6 2010, 02:45:35 UTC
Awww... thank you! glad people like this!

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hana_cho March 5 2010, 11:43:43 UTC
love it I really love it

it is so beautiful and wonderfull written ^^

and it was nice to se Yunho's point of view of the whole story ^^

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ms_ravishing March 6 2010, 02:46:11 UTC
thank you :D
I'm glad you like it (altho it's longer than public enemy :D)

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steffiluvlife March 5 2010, 11:51:42 UTC
loved it! YAYAYAY!:)
hahha i love yunnie !hahah he makes me smile and laugh!

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ms_ravishing March 6 2010, 02:47:44 UTC
yeah, don't we love yunnie here?

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