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ms_ravishing

My public enemy - part III

Jan 10, 2010 02:20

My Public Enemy.
Long One shot, seperated into parts
Romance, Drama, AU
Not Beta-ed

Part I

Part II

Part III

( Part III - He’s naked, with another almost naked man in a room. Their clothes scattered all over the place. They had love bites. His back is hurting. )

fanfics, yunjae

Comments 118

yaya_yunjae January 9 2010, 19:50:53 UTC

gahhhhh!!i loved this!!-flails-
and YAY! there will be yunho's POV!-anticipates-

“No! No!” Jaejoong bumped his head to the table over and over again. -gosh i giggled like mad at this part

ms_ravishing January 10 2010, 09:46:01 UTC

thank you for reading this.. oh you're fast!
however, for the yunho's part.. will take some time :D

yaya_yunjae January 10 2010, 17:49:45 UTC

i ishh ninja~~
ok i will wait eagerly for the yunho one!♥

are_lynn January 9 2010, 20:19:34 UTC

i really like your fic.. i like the connection between yunjae.. really really love this..<3

ms_ravishing January 10 2010, 09:46:34 UTC

Thank you for liking this.. <33

azure_blue January 9 2010, 20:21:27 UTC

Haha, this story is so adorable, I enjoy reading this from the start till the end <3 Thanks for sharing ^^

ms_ravishing January 10 2010, 09:47:05 UTC

It's not boring! Yay! :D

lunarrays January 9 2010, 21:14:13 UTC

poor yun
7 years is a long time to wait
for your love, but, it paid off.

i love the yunjae ending
and can't wait for part2.

ms_ravishing January 10 2010, 09:47:51 UTC

yeah 7 years iis looong time... but they got together after all... thx for reading :D

mimz_song January 9 2010, 21:19:08 UTC

I FREAKING LOVED THIS XD huhu~ lol ^_^ loved it!!

ms_ravishing January 10 2010, 09:48:33 UTC

*ish happy inside*
thx bb! <3