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Feb 22, 2005 08:26

And here - eventually - is an update.

Chapter Eight - I think. ( Read more... )

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anonymous February 22 2005, 09:19:09 UTC

Such a moving chapter! It holds the evil of the Muggle world of that time washing over onto the Magical - or is it perhaps the other way around? Intricate. Nicely woven. Delightful imaging (loved Dumbldore as the sawyer, and the Mrs Norris simile).

Gold Star!

anonymous July 10 2005, 04:56:36 UTC

Felicity Chattox Norris tossed her mourning clothes into the corner of the room in a careless heap, glad the ordeal was finally finished. All those boring townies parading through her house, saying complimentary things about her dead husband, while raising covetous eyebrows at her furnishings ( ... )

anonymous July 12 2005, 21:07:44 UTC

It was a sad time for Jonathan. The other characters had wandered off and his fic was dying ( ... )

Alone in the Caretaker's house anonymous August 24 2005, 05:19:11 UTC

Jon ran his hand through his hair, feeling depressed and frustrated. In front of him on the table lay several disheartening responses to his job queries. Most seemed to follow the same pattern ( ... )

Months Later anonymous November 15 2005, 03:19:23 UTC

Dumbledore paced his office, hands clasped behind his back. Occasionally one of the previous headmasters and mistresses would proffer a suggestion. Eventually Phineas Nigelus cleared his throat overly loudly ( ... )