Chapter One - still no title

Nov 06, 2004 19:18

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Chapter 1 )

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Ch.1 anonymous November 21 2004, 05:53:50 UTC
The tale is entrancing! You've built lots of sympathy/empathy for the character. Can hardly wait to see what you do with it.

More very soon, please.

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lacylu42 November 26 2004, 05:12:35 UTC
Mmm... You and Sam with your maps. I feel so sad for John!! But I like him already. It's a tad "A Farewell to Arms," isn't it? Lovely. Tho hopefully not so dreadfully depressing...

I like the phrase "very exclusive public school." =)

Do you find it hard to write Hagrid? I've only done one chapter with him so far, but I found his dialect dreadfully difficult...

ONWARD!!

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ms_nitt November 26 2004, 12:29:17 UTC
Hooray-- glad you're enjoying it! And we do have a beautiful map, which Sally drew for us. If you'd like to see I can email it to you, but it's BIG-- will take forever to download.Yup-- Hagrid's tricky, no doubt. Whenever Hagrid talks in this story, Sally (essayel) gets the final say, but so far, she hasn't changed my wording much. I''m American, but I spend lots of time with English folk musicians, and as much time as I can afford(every couple of summers) in the north of England and the Scottish borders. I sort of keep a Yorkshire-ish accent in my head when I write him. Sally's Welsh, lives in Abergavenny-- she just has an amazing ear for dialogue in general.

Either one of us, probably Sally for choice, would be glad to look over your Hagrid's speeches!

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