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mrv3000

Doctor Who Fic

Feb 20, 2009 14:20

Title: Seen and Not Definitely Heard
Authors: goldy_dollar and mrv3000
Pairing: Ten II/Rose
Rating: PG (for kissing and spitballs)
Summary: The Doctor is sidelined by Jackie during a Torchwood fundraiser.

A/N: Thanks to shinyopals for betaing and pointing out our complete lack of Britishness!

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altverse, new who, doctor who, fic

Comments 68

intrikate88 February 20 2009, 22:31:50 UTC

This is so delightfully them. You did a wonderful job, I can picture it perfectly. :)

mrv3000 February 20 2009, 22:34:14 UTC

Thank you so much! :)

ivydoor February 20 2009, 22:39:52 UTC

I will NEVER get tired of Ten II vs. Jackie fics. EVER.

"Be very still right now. I understand her vision is based on movement."

Jackie kicks him in the shin. He really should have expected that.

BWAHAHAHAHAHAHA! He SO had that coming.

mrv3000 February 20 2009, 22:41:41 UTC

I will NEVER get tired of Ten II vs. Jackie fics. EVER.

It's such a goldmine, isn't it? :D

BWAHAHAHAHAHAHA! He SO had that coming.

He totally did. :D

electrictoes February 20 2009, 22:39:57 UTC

Oh, brilliant.

Especially love Doctor & Tony interaction <3

mrv3000 February 20 2009, 22:42:12 UTC

Thank you! :)

joyfulfeather February 20 2009, 22:54:51 UTC

HEE! <3 Perfect, perfect way to end the week. They're adorable. And snuggly -- I love him being that handsy, playing with her zipper, etc, when they're standing together. <3

Also, I really do like how you write Jackie. She's not just some simple harridan, she's actually putting them through it for a reason.

mrv3000 February 20 2009, 23:01:15 UTC

HEE! <3 Perfect, perfect way to end the week. They're adorable. And snuggly --

:)

I love him being that handsy, playing with her zipper, etc, when they're standing together. <3

Well there are just so many things to play with when it comes to Rose! ;)

Also, I really do like how you write Jackie. She's not just some simple harridan, she's actually putting them through it for a reason.

Thanks! :) That's actually something that came up when we were trying to figure out how to end the fic. I tossed out an idea that would have wound up disrupting the party even more, but Frances reminded me that Jackie is doing all this for a purpose instead of simply trying to put on airs or something. So the party was spared for Jackie's sake.

beauty_within16 February 20 2009, 23:24:20 UTC

This is perfect. They are so adorable! Thanks for sharing.

mrv3000 February 20 2009, 23:25:02 UTC

Thank you! Glad you liked it!