Sylar/Elle Drabble: Close

Nov 25, 2008 17:38

Title: Close
Author: mrstater
Rating & Warnings: PG-13 for sensuality
Format & Word Count: drabble, 361 words
Prompt: close
Summary: She's standing so close to you now. So close that you could kiss her...
Author's Note: For bratanimus, whose birthday was yesterday. Set during episode 3.9, "It's Coming," the last scene in the electricity cell, when Gabriel's ( Read more... )

character: gabriel gray (sylar), character: elle bishop

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mollyclover21 November 27 2008, 01:43:30 UTC
w o w!!
awesome.

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mrstater November 29 2008, 02:10:51 UTC
Thanks very much! :D

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dana_serenity November 27 2008, 10:49:51 UTC
Lovely drabble ♥

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mrstater November 29 2008, 02:11:08 UTC
Thank you!

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sea_thoughts November 27 2008, 18:17:27 UTC
Very, very sweet portrayal of Gabriel falling in love with Elle all over again. I like how he's journeyed from wanting everything to just wanting to be close to her, from seeing her as special to knowing how special she really is.

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mrstater November 29 2008, 02:14:06 UTC
Aw, thanks, I'm so glad you liked my take on this moment in their relationship. I'm also quite taken of the idea of him having falling for her again despite all that happened.

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sea_thoughts November 30 2008, 19:52:46 UTC
Well, their relationship last time was built on who they could have been: Gabriel as this shy but intelligent watchmaker, Elle as this sensitive, lovely girl. But this time, they both know who the other is; he's saved her and she's saved him. They're both on an equal footing and they're quite similar in their likes and dislikes (not to put too fine a point on it), so their relationship works. Plus, Kristen & Zachary have amazing chemistry.

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cruiscin_lan December 10 2008, 00:58:04 UTC
Late to the party on this one, but I like this drabble very much!

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mrstater December 10 2008, 02:20:01 UTC
Thanks very much!

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