R/T Fic: Another Kind of Magic, Part Six

[mrstater]

Title: Another Kind of Magic (6/7 + Prologue and Epilogue)
Authors: godricgal and mrstater
Illustrator: hrymfaxe
Format and word count: chaptered fic, this part weighs in at 3520 words
Rating and warnings: R for sex
Summary: Something magical has been brewing between Remus and Tonks all summer long. But what happens when an Order assignment requires them to do things

Comments

[merryb87]

first, only because I have to point it out... "What now, she asked?" bit of a quotation misplacement. ;)

Hot sexy chapter! I enjoyed the shower scene very much. However I do say that Tonks running into a lamppost was my favorite part. It was so her! I was waiting for it to happen and it did. I also loved how awkward and out of shape Remus felt, also his clothing!

and who should tell Remus that Adidas stands for "All Day I Dream About Sex"? lol.

[godricgal]

Thanks for the catch, we'll sort that out.

Glad you enjoyed the chapter - and the shower scene. Tonks had to have some kind of mishap whilst jogging after showing Remus up on both fitness and clothing!

I've never heard that about Adidas, but lol, I'll have to remember that.

Thanks again from both of us!

[duck_or_rabbit]

This is really sexy. (Of course, I haven't reviewed for three chapters and show up for the smutty one).

"The bump on my head hurt so badly I didn't notice. Anyway, it's just grazed hands. Not a big deal."

The jogging debacle reminds me of mrstater's rollerblading crash. Dora's idea of rest and recreation after her accident is most satisfying to Remus.

Remus is ready to eat her whole in her athletic suit, isn't he? His humorous reference to his wolf whistle is wonderful - good to see him in high spirits.

hrymfaxe, lovely set of silly and sensual illustrations.

Remus and Dora's intimate stumbling and bumbling about in this installment is easily relatable and true to life. Well done.

[godricgal]

Hee. We're glad you dropped by to let us know you thought this was sexy - that's good to know!

LOL It is a bit like mrstater's accident - perhaps we ought to have send them rollerblading instead. ;)

The wolf whistle line is mrstater's and I did LOL rather a lot when I read it - it's so true!

Who knew feet could be so sexy, but hrymfaxe certainly managed it!

Thanks very much for your reviww. We do appreciate it!

[sspring92]

Love the "How is this going to work" bit! Very realistic, yet still sexy! I don't want their little bubble to burst either!

[godricgal]

Thanks very much! We're happy to know you thought it was sexy, yet still realistic. :)

[philotic_net]

*flails*
This ones for hrymfaxe:

Damn. Good. Feet.
I can see the muscle and tendons under Remus' skin.

[godricgal]

Hee. They are great feet. Take a bow, hrymfaxe!

[hrymfaxe]

Thank you! I had fun drawing those feet - and also scouring the internet for references. LOL

[shimotsuki]

Hee! A great slapstick chapter with the wardrobe malfunctions and the jogging mishaps. But so sweet to see them sensual and comfortable together. I'm sure they are awfully sorry to be seeing this weekend end, but I have a feeling they'll figure out a way to keep the magic going. ;)

Those feet are the perfect illustration for a steamy shared shower.

I must, however, register a protest at a mid-thirties gentleman being described as "middle-aged". ;)

[godricgal]

We had a lot of fun writing the silliness in this part - the jogging scene is one of the few things that has consistently been pencilled in for every version of the story over the last couple of years, so it was fun to finally get to it, and we're glad you enjoyed the slapstick element to it. You'll have to wait and see how the end of the weekend pans out for them, but we hope you'll think it a satisfying outcome for them both.

You know, I originally wrote that bit with the middle age reference and I'm a little surprised at myself. I think I shall have to confer with Tater and see if we can edit that out, lol.

Thanks for the review - we do appreciate it! :D