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zephyr_winds September 3 2011, 02:04:12 UTC
Loved this. Very original plot and well-written. My favourite parts have to be when Penny knocked on Sheldon's door and when Sheldon gave her an awkward hug saying, “No one has ever referred to me as their friend before.” (Aww!) Without giving away any plot twists to review readers, I knew exactly who the Bearded Man was from the get-go. *snickers*

My favourite line from the entire story comes from Penny: “Maybe if you didn’t follow me around with a broom and dustpan like I was some out of control toddler I wouldn’t feel the need to rebel against your neuroses!” Hehe!

So, to wrap up my rambling review, I loved the premise, the plot the characterisation, AND that you left it nice and open-ended. Sequel, anyone? ;) Fantastic job!

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mrssnape13 September 3 2011, 02:11:03 UTC
Thank you so much! :) I just had to let Penny get some of her own back, for all the times that Sheldon's knocked on her door.

Thanks for taking the time to comment! You made my night. :)

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notalwaysweak September 3 2011, 09:35:05 UTC
This was a really lovely story! I was chuffed that Poirot was in it; he's my favourite of Agatha Christie's various detectives. I liked how you kept them in character in such a very different setting to the modern day.

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mrssnape13 September 3 2011, 11:47:32 UTC
Thank you very much. :) I love Poirot as well. He's always so delightful to read about, so this was fun. Glad you liked it!

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jazzfic September 4 2011, 02:21:12 UTC
That was thoroughly enjoyable! Your Poirot especially was just delightful.

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mrssnape13 September 5 2011, 02:04:17 UTC
Thank you so much! Poirot was actually my biggest worry, because his character is so iconic. I'm so glad it worked for you. :)

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htbthomas October 25 2011, 01:33:09 UTC
A very interesting premise - you did a lovely job with it!

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mrssnape13 October 25 2011, 02:23:38 UTC
Thank you very much! :)

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skyfang November 2 2011, 19:21:31 UTC
this is one intriguing and engaging piece of work. great job.

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mrssnape13 November 2 2011, 19:31:43 UTC
Thank you! :)

I love your icon, by the way. My brother and I like to watch "Case Closed."

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