I really like the way this is written.It's like average person speech but with still all the detail. And a few of the phrases such as the memory chip thing were really funny. And i like the way that we don't know what happened.Are you going to continue this are leave it like that? Cause I think it will be good either way if you leave it or add more.
Thank you ;) This is the first time I tried writing like this. I had other 1st person POV fics before, but more complicated. This one was jut for fun, glad you liked it ^.^
I think I'm going to leave it as it is. I actually have strict rules about not writing slash and just balancing on the line, so.. if I were to continue, would have to cross that line I guess lol. And I kind of like how everything's left hanging in the air right now :D
not even gonna lie, I'm not the type who reads guy x guy fics on a regular basis, especially if it's pairings amongst 2PM members but man, this was daebak XD
and damn Wooyoung, he's always got his way with dem noonas ;)
Keep up the great work na :D This was entertaining to read <3
Did I just see a Junsu in your text? XD ah, I browsed LJ just to check your profile . I thought your bday was next week. Ah for some reason, a thoughtI kept me thinking!! Why are you awake?
You have no idea how frustrating it is, that there are 2 Kim Junsus and I need to deal with both of them on regular basis! lol. Always have to keep in mind whom I talk to, and make myself clear which Junsu I'm talking about xD
Nah, Afruzie. My bday is more than a month away. I'm born exactly in the middle of the year. heh heh. I dunno why I was awake. I guess I just had to finish writing this otherwise I wouldn't have been able to sleep x)
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I think I'm going to leave it as it is. I actually have strict rules about not writing slash and just balancing on the line, so.. if I were to continue, would have to cross that line I guess lol. And I kind of like how everything's left hanging in the air right now :D
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not even gonna lie, I'm not the type who reads guy x guy fics on a regular basis, especially if it's pairings amongst 2PM members but man, this was daebak XD
and damn Wooyoung, he's always got his way with dem noonas ;)
Keep up the great work na :D This was entertaining to read <3
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Wooyoung with nunas... *sigh* I guess I can't keep my bias out of it xD
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Why are you awake?
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Nah, Afruzie. My bday is more than a month away. I'm born exactly in the middle of the year. heh heh. I dunno why I was awake. I guess I just had to finish writing this otherwise I wouldn't have been able to sleep x)
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Thanks. Glad you liked it. Even though your biases had more like ninja!presence here. ^^;;
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