manipulation, 1/2

[mrsedjack]

title: manipulation (ver. o2)
pairing: jaemin
length: 2,303 (1/2)
rating: all the way from PG to R (this part is, uh, kissing-level)
summary: in which jaejoong launches his master plan to make changmin think about him.

Comments

Total Win

[anonymous]

Too Cute!
And oh so SoulFighter! This captures what JaeMin is, irrisistable love. No matter how long you fight it (literally) you will never excape, it's irrisistable. You story is so beautiful, I love it! And I really want to read part 2. I can't wait to see what is next, I'm glad you didn't scrap this because it's really nice. Thanks!

[mrsedjack]

you will. :D second part is up. IT IS FINISHED, HOORAY! :')
♥

[cherrieeme]

this is very well written ^^

i love how lyrics have been incorporated into this. veyr well written.!!!
i love it :D

SOULFIGHTER COUPLE FTW!!!

[mrsedjack]

thank you! :D

really? i like it when other people use lyrics in their fics - but i wanted to use songs that people actually know, so. 8D it's all kpop. and then i was afraid it would be too cheesy, but i'm glad to hear you like it. :)

second part's up! :D

[mrsedjack]

don't read so late at night then! 8D get some sleep.

all comments are awesome. :) thank you! ♥

and second part is up! :D

[indevan]

i love the unique way jaejoong thinks and how he goes about obtaining his goal, he can be pretty single minded. it was in all really sweet ^-^

[mrsedjack]

jaejoong is.. unique. 83 i tried to make it as jaejoong as possible, but you never know. :D i'm happy that you like it.
second part's up!