Going Left Around the World: Chapter 69

[mrs_spamlad]

Title: Going Left Around the World
Author: mrs-spamlad
Pairing: Jack/Ennis
Rating: R
Feedback: have at it!

Disclaimer: Brokeback Mountain and the original characters of Jack and Ennis were created by and belong to Annie Proulx. No money is being made from this- I’m just taking them out for a spin!

Comments

[roby100]

Another perfect chapter with the "marry me" part still in my mind too!
I've always loved Josh, now more than ever.
I'm loving Ennis too, he is out of my black list now!
Thanks so much for the story.
A big hug
Roby

[mrs_spamlad]

Dearest Roby! Ennis, off the black list?! Oh, my! That is good to hear. My goal was always for him to be certainly flawed, but also, at the heart of it, redeemable. I'm hoping he will achieve that over the next several chapters.
Thanks so much for reading this story for so long!
Big hug back,
jill

[adahleah]

good update. I am so curious about Ennis and Josh's conversation but it was probably long overdue.

[mrs_spamlad]

I agree, I think it was long overdue too. Josh may decide to share some of what was said.... :)
Thanks for reading!
jill

[turtle_2806]

I'm just back from holidays and rewarded with a new chapter of your wonderful story. So good Jack and Ennis take things quite slowly. I guess it's good they get to know each other again after this long time before they make decisions about the future.
Thank you so much. Christina

[mrs_spamlad]

Welcome back, Christina! I'm glad you enjoyed the update. Thanks for reading and sticking with the story for so long :)
jill

Be still my heart

[shieldmaid1]

This passage gives me butterflies EVERY time I read it:

“I’d ask you to marry me right now if I thought you’d say yes,” he said, meeting my gaze. “But you wouldn’t, and with good reason. So, like I said, I want to get to know you again. Who you are now - not the version of you that’s still in my head.”

Thank you!! Your writing is a gift to us.

[lucerodelalba]

Great chapter :). I hope Jack will visit Ennis soon. There is a typo I spotted and thought you would like to know:
"I guess me and Josh had some things to SAY to each other." :)
Johanna