[fic] club no.1; jaejoong/changmin

[mrs_min_ai]

club no.1
~5,000w
changmin/jaejoong,  (side)yoochun/junsu, slight yunchunsu, NC-17
Humor, romance, smut
warnings: extremely horny yoosu, potty mouthed!su, and s.e.x.
summary: Junsu sets Changmin up on a date with a really hot guy he and Yoochun met at the bar. Humor and raunchy bathroom sex ensues.

Comments

[engraved_16]

WAHH >.< THIS JaeMin was fuckn HOT!!
Thanks so much for sharing!!~ I loved it :DDDD

[mrs_min_ai]

YAYYY! I'm glad you thought it was so hot! x]♥
thanks so much for reading and commenting!!! :D♥

[nivani]

Definitely a nice thing to wake up to ♥

But there were too many typos for my liking bb~
there/their (Changmin pulls there bodies a bit closer; traps it between there swaying bodies; made there way back out into the club; locking there lips together) and your/you're (I'll have whatever your having.) and I believe here: "The man was sex on legs! He really wishes he knew where Yunho wondered off to" it should be: "The man is sex on legs! He really wished he knew where Yunho wondered off to" and I'm afraid there are more~
it's quite distracting while reading ^^;

I hope it's ok for me to point that out? ^^;;;
And I'm all for seme!min XDD

[mrs_min_ai]

Thanks for reading!

And it's no problem. I really make stupid little mistakes like those all the time. >.< I literally posted this right after I wrote the last line so I didn't have time to go over it. Believe it or not, I actually had more before, but I've been going back and forth editing what I can find. So thanks for pointing those out. :)

Hehe, seme!min. <333

[cmplctd]

! YESHHHH!!! you're back !!

♥
KYA!
this was so long but definitely moved at a swell pace. :D :D
XD XD horny!yoosu just cracked me up and the quirky ness and everything

ahhhhh.
i've missed you ^___^

[mrs_min_ai]

YAY FOR BEING BACKNESS-NESS!!! :DDD♥

and YEP! this was damn loooong, tweleve pages in i remember correctly. most of it written today! :O but i just wrote down whatever came to mind and was like fuck it. :| i need to write something. lol the yoosu was damn fun to write! XDDD

i've missed you too bb!!! *smooooooches*
but now i have to sleep cause it's like 4am and my butt hurts. :x lol
<3333333333

[cmplctd]

o_O 4am. YES SLEEP!

and butt hurts?
hehehe what were you doing? o_O
hehehe

[mrs_min_ai]

i know right! i'm totally not gonna wanna get up later. T___T

but i was sitting in an uncomfortable chair for three hours. lmao
hehehe, what were you thinking? 8D

okay, sleeping like right now. ZZZZZZZzzzzzzzzz~

[anthem4cruelty]

from now on...adore your smut shall i do ♥ ♥ ♥

Min is fucking HOT!!!!

how about some HoYooSu 3sum? *grins*

[mrs_min_ai]

yippie!!! this was the fist smut i've written in MONTHS! :O so i'l glad you liked it!!! :D :D :D♥

hahaha! i love it when min's all dominate! x] *fans self*

and i was totally thinking about doing a 3sum after i wrote the last part. maybe in the nexy verse i write! :DDD thanks so much for reading & commenting!!!

p.s. your icon... *dies*

[keight_michelle]

that. was. intense. wheeew. *fans self*

i really, really like this lol. will you be writing more of this verse? *crosses fingers*

♥

[mrs_min_ai]

thank. you. so. much!!!! ♥

i'm glad you liked it, cause i did too! so i'll most likely definitly write more from the verse. i love these characters! :DDD

thanks for reading & commenting!!!

[keight_michelle]

yesssss! *huggles j00* teehee. ♥

i love these characters too. horny!yoosu ftw. \o/