Comments | mrs_min_ai: [fic] just Remember to come home; yoochun/jaejoong

mrs_min_ai

[fic] just Remember to come home; yoochun/jaejoong

Jan 15, 2009 15:31

just remember to come home
~3,300w
jaejoong/yoochun, R
romance,drama
summary: He appeared from out of nowhere one day. Just some stranger with unkempt black hair and a thin white t-shirt sitting on the front steps of his home.

( He’s sensitive to other people’s emotions and cries for their sad stories, yet never sheds a tear for his own. )

pairing:jaejoong/yoochun, length:one-shot

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mrs_min_ai January 15 2009, 23:10:10 UTC

-grins like an idiot-

thank you so much! i'm so very happy you liked this, it came out of no where honestly. i've never written jaechun like this, and i kind of like it. x]

thanks so much for you wonderful words. i definitly have to write a jaechun with a happy ending now, they're just too pretty not to.

and i'm glad to hear you loved my yoochun! i had a hard time characterizing him, but i think he came out wonderful in the end. i also loved him, he made me smile and cry all at the same time.

thanks so much for reading and commenting! :D♥

renichifreak January 15 2009, 21:14:45 UTC

this is awesome, but I'm SO wondering what's wrong...and what happened to him....

mrs_min_ai January 15 2009, 23:12:48 UTC

thank you bb! *hugs*
you can make it as what ever you want it to be. maybe yoochun lost his memory in an accident, maybe he has mental issues, either way i thought he was wonderful and was supposed to keep you curious! x] *is kind of evil* lol
thanks for reading and commenting!!! ilu~ :D♥

renichifreak January 15 2009, 23:14:24 UTC

...ONG, ILU2!!!::tackles you and snuggles you::

sunev789 January 15 2009, 22:24:10 UTC

I don't read JaeChun that much. DDDX FAIL?
But because it's you bbs...
*saves for later*
♥

mrs_min_ai January 15 2009, 23:14:37 UTC

i don't write JaeChun that much. xD
but you're so sweet bb! ilusm!
i hope you like it! :D
:D♥

sunev789 January 16 2009, 00:24:07 UTC

CRIESALLOVERTHEPLACE
God, you captured everything so beautifully! DDDD:
The entire time it was sad & lonely, but so hopeful & loving.
It constantly felt like the sunrise & sunset in the spring time, just that content feeling you get...
Ugh, my heart.
ILOVEYOU. :'DDDD ♥
<3333

mrs_min_ai January 16 2009, 19:05:55 UTC

*hands you giant tissues of love*
thank you so much bb! i'm so happy to hear you liked it even though it's jaechun! xD it means alot. *huggles you tight*
ilu2~!♥

fairytokyo January 15 2009, 23:47:00 UTC

this was so lovely.
that's all i can manage right now :3 ♥

mrs_min_ai January 16 2009, 01:47:31 UTC

awww~
thank you so much! i'm glad you likes it! :D♥
thanks for reading and commenting!!! <33333

sungie86 January 16 2009, 00:49:53 UTC

that was an amazing story. for all the simplicity, the strange circumstances, the everything, it's still so quintessentially JaeChun. favoriting this <3 there are some places I would desperately love to iron wrinkles from the grammar and semantics, but the story itself is lovely and perfect and i couldn't find a thing to complain about there :) really love it, very evocative.

mrs_min_ai January 16 2009, 01:53:10 UTC

thank you so much for the feed back! it really means alot. i'm glad you liked this. :) i'm honored you're favoriting this, it makes me feel happy. i know, my grammer is atrocious, but i'm glad it didn't distract too much from the overall piece. ^^ thank you so much for reading and commenting. :D♥