nooo mars ;_; i like the bonds between the shitennou (and now mercury as well) despite being part of the dark kingdom, and i'm very curious how mars and merc will interact now that they're both here...
This is still so good! Oh man, the tricky way that they captured Rei--that HAD to be Ami who came up with that. Not fair, indeed, but neither is poor Mercury's situation.
Once again, I love how you've thought out every detail of their capture and the way that Beryl tortures them into submission, and I love how you explore the characters' reactions to it. So awesome!
I actually have things thought out that like no one gets to see b/c of the limited perspective, but there is so much that I know that I hope comes through even though it's not actually "on stage."
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I'm glad that you're able to see those bonds despite the limited perspective! Means I'm doing something right!
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Once again, I love how you've thought out every detail of their capture and the way that Beryl tortures them into submission, and I love how you explore the characters' reactions to it. So awesome!
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I actually have things thought out that like no one gets to see b/c of the limited perspective, but there is so much that I know that I hope comes through even though it's not actually "on stage."
Thanks for the feedback and encouragement!
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Please to have more soon? (This is a fabulous switch too, I get to pester you and Thalia for fic instead of the other way around HA!)
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More will be coming, but it may be a bit cause of me leaving super early tomorrow morning and being gone the rest of the week.
Though who knows, if I get bored at camp, I might write :)
Just as long as you don't stop writing, either, hun!
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