Zoe and Jade Blanket

Apr 27, 2010 23:34

charliechaplin2 asked for Zoi (Zoe) and Jade with blanket.

I decided to tweak a bit and go with their past life, so it's Siobhan and Tuon

Big Girls Don't Cry )

cearul, silmil, angsty april, tuon, siobhan

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jenbunny April 28 2010, 05:56:46 UTC
:( sad, but I liked it ^_^

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charliechaplin2 April 28 2010, 20:33:55 UTC
WHY ARE THEY CRYING?! *sniffle* *sniffle*

I believe the prompt was given BEFORE angsty April (if I'm wrong, let's ignore that), therefore, can you write another drabble (when you have time) where Tuon is not being heartbroken over the fact that Siobhan is crying?!

*sniffle*

I love the little details, like the water being drunk but the food being untouched.

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mrcrybrilliance April 28 2010, 21:54:25 UTC
But even with it being angsty, it shows a LOT of growth on Tuon's part, this is probably a couple of years in the future, so the twins and Tuon are both 9ish, I'd say.

As to why they're crying: "if it had been his mother, he would also be inconsoluble."

Their mother died. I think to avoid any more dead babbys, she died in an accident of some kind, but that's why they're both inconsoluble, and they have more privacy with Cearul visiting the Shittenou-Trainees than if Siobhan had gone to the more populated barracks that Cearul's in.

Endymion is kinda pouty about the food not being touched. Karan and Nascha, however, eased that some.

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charliechaplin2 April 28 2010, 20:34:18 UTC
PS: Thank you for writing this!

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venusorbit1 April 29 2010, 06:47:51 UTC
OK the next time I get dogpiled by you for the dead babbys, I'm going to mention the dead mommy!

UNG. *sniffs, blows nose* God, fucking...Moms and Grandmoms and dogs should never die.

OK off to tie Evander to the train tracks. *whistles*

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