Oh great I did the same thing as Spirit and slowly started recognizing the patients and now I want to lay flat on the floor and never get up. Good lord. Screw this month, seriously! Whose freaking idea was this.
Poor Ami. Goddamn. Please give me another Mason jar on the first of May so I have one bright spot to look forward to!
Eh, this is probably my only real entry for Angsty April. I tried angsting earlier, but I think it was because it was KidVerse and everyone knows that ends happy that it fell flat.
But angst for angst sake is simply not my forte. This is all tell and no show.
I've got another verse I might work on. Involves angst, but not for its own sake.
And I'm sure I'll do lots of fluff this month cause... you're killing us.
And for crying out loud you opened with Ami killing herself and Evander!
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As soon as I started to recognize the patients, my breath caught in my throat. Poor, poor Ami.
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Poor Ami. Goddamn. Please give me another Mason jar on the first of May so I have one bright spot to look forward to!
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But angst for angst sake is simply not my forte. This is all tell and no show.
I've got another verse I might work on. Involves angst, but not for its own sake.
And I'm sure I'll do lots of fluff this month cause... you're killing us.
And for crying out loud you opened with Ami killing herself and Evander!
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I'm going to read something happy now.
That being said, this is a well written and heart felt piece. Poor Ami.
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