Coitus Interuptus

[mrcrybrilliance]

There was a frenzy as the two entered the shrine, and Jie forced himself to focus on something other than Rei’s perfect, smooth neck beneath the fall of rich black hair just long enough to ask, “Are you sure?  I don’t want to desecra…”

The words were cut off as Rei slipped her hands into his pants, answering his question without any room for doubt.

Comments

[li_yingfa]

Sandy! What the Heck! That was both awesome and hilarious! I know I was there for some of the discussion but!!! That's what I get for going to sleep. Just the descriptions and the reactions and Mamoru's stupid reason for calling him, it all works, and works so well.

I'd say you are the 1l33t...ummm...you know what I mean.

[mrcrybrilliance]

Thanks!

LOL, it's ok, I'm not the l33t-speaking kind of geek. So no worries, but thanks for the compliment!

I'm apparently now supposed to do an A/Z version too. Somehow, I'm sure before all is said and done, all of the couples will have a coitus interuptus story. I may switch it up a bit though and have it not always be Mamoru's abuse of power. We'll see.

I think the main thing I was worried about with this was whether or not the sex was good. I'm....very inexperienced. And what little experience I do have is het (which might seem appropriate, but wait) and well... I hated sex. I mean, not a huge surprise once I figured everything out, but yeah. So I was not sure I COULD write good het-smut without pulling the curtain.

It was fun though, and the reaction has been very encouraging!

[venusorbit1]

Hey Mina/Kunz already has a 'coitis interuptus' story in the form of Kaela, that little bonerkiller. XD

[mrcrybrilliance]

I don't think the kids count. Though I don't have any, I think that's in their job description. Also, Kaela was kind of pre-forgiven, where as Mamoru or Usagi? Not so much.

[covenmouse]

XDD that was adorable

[venusorbit1]

I love this so much. FAVORITES! God, really. Mamoru, you absolute bastard. I guess life's pretty good when you're the king!