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[mrbrown189]

"Shaking like a dog shittin' razorblades,
waking up next to nothing after dreaming of you and me
I'm waking up all alone, waking up so relieved
while you're taking your time with apologies,
I'm making my plans for revenge."

-Alkaline Trio

She brushed the broken glass from her shoulder and took another sip of her cranberry and vodka cocktail.

Comments

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[steffleupagus]

yo sam its stefanie... i liked your story a lot especially this part:

"When she saw the geeky boy again, and when he saw her, it was almost comical how they rushed to each other.
No.
It was fucking hilarious."

And also great last line.

Re: s

[mrbrown189]

Hey, thanks for reading it, i didnt think anybody would. Thank you:)

[sixyearholiday]

this is the story you were working on huh?

it's cool. what's the title exactly?

[mrbrown189]

I dont know, i just wrote it when i was really kind of pissed off.
Im working on a different one, this i just wrote in a couple of hours.

[erotophobic]

That shit was INTENSE, SAM BROWN

though I still wish you would write Suite 16

[mrbrown189]

I know i wish i could write it, but its already the name of a movie.
it was my idea first damnit!!!

[le_chomage]

woah. ver nice indeed.
"They would be back that night, the sunken ship of an apartment would lose it’s water and float again.

All the rats could scurry back only to run away once it started sinking again." Love that line.

[mrbrown189]

thank you. It seems really short now that i just read it all at once.

[missed_euphoria]

I really liked that, I agree with everything everyone said and I really liked,

"The room burst with light and noise. His body appeared to be dancing to a strobe light, but in reality was being filled with bullets."

as well, it created a really great visual- the entire piece was very visual, I really liked it.