MY VALENTINE

[mr_redrum]

Forever in my heart my valentine
But I know you weren’t mine
Forever in my heart my valentine
But I know you’re someone else’s sunshine

So, I wouldn’t call you as my sun
But I would keep you as my moon
‘Cause only in a dream at night we’re having fun
At least until the morning sun comes too soon

Nighty night my valentine
I’ll guarded you ‘

Comments

[tshapo_chi]

*sighs* how you can think that my crappy stuff from HS is any good when you turn out stuff like this amazes me.

[mr_redrum]

...but you already wrote those beautiful poems when you still in HS,sensei... me only doing it just now... and please don't said it's a crappy stuffs... we both know it's not. your poems is beautiful, deep, good in grammar and it's touching the heart whose reading it. so it's must be good...anyway,thank you for come by and reading mine,sensei ^_^...

[muse_of_hands]

I like the middle verses best. Very sweet.

[mr_redrum]

*blushed and thinking, why suddenly peoples reading my not so good poems???*

...anyway, thank you for come by and reading my stuffs!. I really appreciate it...