normative language

[mr_quackenbush]

first draft of a poem i wrote for a jappy girl who made me smile last night.
"battery park

Comments

[korgmeister]

Jappy as in Japanese or as in Jewish American Princess?

[mr_quackenbush]

the second one.

I have taken the liberty of translating your poem into Jive

[berbelang]

"battery park"
Ebony ebony
ebony goats bottle
full o' gasoline, ebony
spits out da damn sky
light, claih' as day;
an' ebony top
boils burst in da sun,
tah' smears ebony
ebony ebony
face, ha's not mine,
coughs coal ebony dust
phlegm balls back into
da ebony wind,
cataract gray, it'll all
pitch forward
ebony out
face waaay down in bile.