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A mostly finished poem
May 07, 2009 07:32
To the East is the front,
To the West is the back,
Watch the sun to keep track...
I just need to figure out the last line.
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manakitten
May 7 2009, 12:54:19 UTC
Why does there need to be another line?
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mr_chibi_jester
May 8 2009, 11:03:42 UTC
because I think it would sound better with a fourth line, and that line should rhyme with front.
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