The "tells"

[mprice]

These are the clues I put into the first chapter of the story "Differing Points Of View." If you haven't read it, this post is one, giant spoiler.

Comments

[mullenkamp]

Heh heh heh. I was suspicious at #2, almost positive at #3, sure without a doubt at #4. :D Kind of surprised Dorian didn't figure it out, but seeing as he was in pretty bad shape, not that surprised.

Tricky! And very nice.

[mprice]

Dorian is the only one not put off by "Iron Klaus." The idea was for him to be confronted with the persona "blind."