[Fanfic] The Kid: Chapter 16/24

May 22, 2011 18:21

Title: The Kid 
Author/Artist: MoyaKite
Character(s) or Pairing(s): Mainly Prussia, Germany, and Freddy (little kid!OC), but almost everyone could end up in here eventually. (In this chapter: Freddy, Prussia, Canada, Romano, America.)
Rating: G (May approach PG-13 in future chapters)
Warnings: Fluff, discussions of mortality, potential for future ( Read more... )

c: america, c: oc, c: canada, c: romano, type: fanfiction, c: prussia, chapterfic: the kid, fandom: hetalia

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Long time reader, first time commenter m(_ _)m shinyandverynew May 23 2011, 23:15:45 UTC
As always, seeing this updated brings a smile to my face :)
It makes me happy that you made Romano one of the major-ish characters, he's my favorite <33

And as for updates, I think something along the lines of twice a week would be cool, so it's pretty often but it's not all at once :)

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Re: Long time reader, first time commenter m(_ _)m moyakite May 23 2011, 23:39:11 UTC
I'm glad that it does! It's... Kind of darker in future chapters, but I still keep the fluffy bits. Or I tried, anyway. So I hope you keep enjoying it!

Haha, yeah, Romano really grew on me. <3

Okay! Twice weekly sounds really good, actually... Which days of the week would you prefer, since you're my only voter thus far?

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animehedonist May 24 2011, 15:44:33 UTC
That was so sweet, but with that bit of sadness that is sneaking it's way in but still so lovely. I wasn't about to give up on seeing this fic done so I'm glad to hear it is, post the updates at what works best for you and i think everyone will be happy.

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moyakite May 24 2011, 18:22:47 UTC
Thank you! I'm deciding between weekly and twice weekly updates at the moment. I don't want everyone to get a huge fic dump, but I also want it to be regular and have a strong flow... It's a hard decision, really, which is why I'm leaving it up to the readers.

Thank you so much for commenting! (And I really do hope that everyone remains happy with this fic right through the ending...)

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sweden_chan May 25 2011, 12:58:46 UTC
Finally had the time to read it!! And it was fabulous!! I love it <3

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moyakite May 28 2011, 17:46:43 UTC
Thank you for your comment! I'm really glad that you enjoyed it.

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kuriixcurry May 27 2011, 22:17:06 UTC
Ah, didn't see that update before ... !
So, awesome chapter, as usually, thank you. ♥
Romano is really sweet, and Freddy is already so mature, he shouldn't worry like that, they're all so cute ~ ;w;
(& Please, Canada, your story was really scary ... ! My reaction was almost like America's, despite the fact that I didn't even know the beginning. I'm so weird. 8D)
But it would be interesting if it's getting kinda darker.

About the updates, I don't really mind, as far as there's one.
All your updates really makes me happy ~
But maybe once a week will be perfect ?

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moyakite May 28 2011, 17:57:16 UTC
Yeah, it seems like a lot of people missed the update. I think it's because of the brief hiatus I took ( ... )

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kuriixcurry May 28 2011, 22:34:05 UTC
(Glad to hear I'm not that weird. xD
Well done for the story then. :> )
What day ? Hm, to me, Sunday sounds good. Or maybe Saturday, I don't really know. However, if it's in the middle of the week, I won't be able to read it, since I'm a boarder, at school.
But I won't mind if it's not the week-end, I won't be selfish. 8D

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moyakite May 28 2011, 23:18:56 UTC
Sunday seems like the best day for me... Hmmm, we'll see. I'll keep updating, regardless!

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esonador May 30 2011, 10:41:55 UTC
That end :3 Romaanooo :3 I want you to help me with babies too :D
Romano is too much awesome :)

but Prussia...poor boy :( You really made me sad. You know that?

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moyakite May 30 2011, 15:30:45 UTC
I'm glad that you liked Romano! He's not going to be around for a few chapters, but he'll definitely be coming back. So don't lose hope!

Um, I'm sorry to make you sad? Unfortunately, it's just going to get darker from now on. I hope that you keep enjoying the fic, though!

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esonador May 30 2011, 16:48:41 UTC
Thx for telling me :) I won't then!

It's not like that I don't love sad stories, but it always breaks my heart when Prussia is dying...or someone hurts him...or he is missing his brother. Still,I love to read that. So yes, I'm sad, but I enjoyed it :)

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moyakite June 6 2011, 15:41:54 UTC
Well, I'm glad that you enjoyed it! There's a new chapter up, but it may make you even more sad than this one did...

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