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[Fanfic] The Kid: Chapter 14/24

Apr 17, 2011 21:22

Title: The Kid
Author/Artist: MoyaKite
Character(s) or Pairing(s): Mainly Prussia, Germany, and Freddy (little kid!OC), but almost everyone could end up in here eventually. (In this chapter: Freddy, Prussia, Canada, Romano, France, Spain, England, Germany, Italy, Greece, Hungary, America.)
Rating: G (thus far)
Warnings: Fluff, discussions of ( Read more... )

c: america, c: italy, c: hungary, c: spain, c: romano, c: germany, c: oc, c: france, for: kink meme (deanon), c: japan, c: canada, type: fanfiction, c: prussia, chapterfic: the kid, c: greece, fandom: hetalia

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schwubdiwuppxd April 18 2011, 08:38:23 UTC

Yay^^ another chapter xD

Hehe... I like Greeces gift^^ And yay, scones from England :D
Could it be, that Prussias gift is an Iron Cross...? I think that would fit...

Hmmm...it would be interesting to see how Freddy's doing in school... Perhaps an age around 10/11? Just a suggestion...

Hm...however, I really love youre writing^^ Thank you very much~

moyakite May 23 2011, 23:42:36 UTC

Whoa, I never replied to anybody's comments! Sorry about that.

There have been two new chapters posted since your comment. Good guess about the gift! I considered it, but then I worried about all of the religion I might have to bring into this fic, so I finally decided on something else.

We'll get to see Freddy at school quite soon, as a matter of fact! I won't tell you what ages you'll see him at, but I hope you like it!

Thank you for commenting!

emmones April 18 2011, 09:29:00 UTC

Aww, Freddy is just an adorable little sweetheart, your story just keeps getting better and better.

Ooh, I would like to see Freddy's First Day at School~!

moyakite May 23 2011, 23:45:24 UTC

Oops! I never replied! Um, thank you for commenting! (There are two new chapters since you commented here, just in case you missed them.)

I'm glad that you think the story has been improving! I've got it mostly wrapped up, now, aside from a few more chapters to write this week. I haven't decided what schedule I'll be posting them on, though...

We see his first morning on the way to school, and we also get to hear about his day! Would you like me to add a few scenes from his POV on his first day, though?

sweden_chan April 18 2011, 12:41:30 UTC

A new chapter, and oh so cute it was *w*
Every time I read a new chapter of this, I swear I die a bit of cuteness overload!

Ah, I wanna know how this'll end. But at the same time, I don't want it to end ;w; So for the time being, just keep going! OwO I'll be waiting for the next chapter....

moyakite May 23 2011, 23:47:41 UTC

Sorry that I never replied to either of your latest comments! I just posted a new chapter and noticed that I hadn't thanked my commenters. Oops!

I'm glad that you like it so much! I hope you keep liking it as the story progresses... I'm rather worried about what everyone will think.

Well, I've figured out the ending, and I've written just about everything... I'll be done by the end of the week. But it's up to my readers to tell me what sort of schedule they want me to post on!

sweden_chan May 24 2011, 09:45:27 UTC

No worries!

You don't have to worry at all, the story is wonderful! I love it!!

An end? so soon? OwO I want to read it.... but I don't want it to end.... damn

moyakite May 24 2011, 15:10:22 UTC

Oh, it has a good ten chapters left, at least. The ending isn't so soon, really. I just took the time to write everything up ahead of time so that I could release it easily.

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animehedonist April 18 2011, 12:50:26 UTC

I swear I'm not 100% sure how much I've used this icon in relation to this fic but it might end up the official one for it since it's so very nice and fun to read. Freddie running around in a suit and apron is just so adorable. And just so much cute.

moyakite May 23 2011, 23:49:12 UTC

Thank you for all of your comments! I hope that you keep enjoying the fic from here on out--I've nearly got it all completed, and all that's left, really, is to post it. For the most part, anyway.

kuriixcurry April 18 2011, 14:01:28 UTC

Freddy, you cute sweetheart. ♥
Lovely chapter as usual, it makes me love children. *w*
& I laughed at England's scones. xD
It's so adorable, I think I'll do a fanart of your fic. ♥
(When I'll have time, though ...)
Can't wait for the next chapter ~

moyakite May 23 2011, 23:51:19 UTC

Thank you for your lovely comment! I just realized when posting chapter sixteen that I'd never replied...

I'm really happy that I've been getting you to like children. I hope you keep enjoying the fic as it wraps up and everything. I'm really worried about what everyone will think... Ah well. I've already written it, so I don't think I could make myself turn back now.

I would looove to see fanart of this fic! If you ever post it, please let me know! That would totally make my day!

kuriixcurry May 28 2011, 22:47:40 UTC

Oops, I forgot to reply here ! (Like that, we're on the same level, eh ? 8D )
& You already wrote all of it ? You're amazing ! I'm looking forward for the next chapters to be released then ~
Don't worry, I'll always watch for your updates ! >:3

About the fanart, I already know what to draw, but I unfortunately don't have enough time to draw it (with the exams and all ...). D:
But of course, I'll show it to you once it's done. ow<)b

moyakite May 28 2011, 23:18:25 UTC

I already wrote almost all of it, and I meant to finish it today, but my finger joints hurt rather badly, so I can't type anything very long. x_x I have the whole story thought up, though, so it should be fine. I have almost all of it ready, so I have several weeks before I get to the parts I haven't done yet.

I decided to friend you, since you've been such a loyal fan. I hope that the future fic stuff doesn't disappoint!

Also, I can't wait to see the fanart! x3 I'll be looking forward to it!

Good luck with exams!

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