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cappy712 August 12 2013, 17:40:46 UTC
Awesome chapter update. I didn't watch too many Criminal Minds but that was one of the eps that I did watch. Great reworking and bringing it to J2. Loved the way you are weaving the story. Thank you so much for sharing.

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moviegeek03 August 19 2013, 00:42:48 UTC
Thank you sweetie! Happy you are enjoying it :)

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imaginecoolname August 12 2013, 18:20:54 UTC
I love that both Felicia and Chris scolded Jensen for treating poor Jared like shit. Hopefully Jared will prove himself to Jensen soon, so we can get on with the getting together, lol. ;) I do like the antagonistic beginning, though, especially since it's true to CM canon. Great update, looking forward to more!

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dont_hate_me01 August 12 2013, 18:29:54 UTC
Must say I'm glad that both Felicia and Chris came down on Jensen, but I'm also happy that Jensen stood up for Jared with the police!

Great chapter, don't love this cliffy you left us with, but it's only 7 more nights before the next update, so I'll be patient!!

GREAT FREAKING STORY!!!!

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obsidianromance August 12 2013, 20:09:44 UTC
I just got a chance to catch up on this story today. I am so excited for it. Thank you for sharing!!!
I love Jared's retort to Jensen breathing down his neck. :-)
Keep up the good work!

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ellyk29 August 12 2013, 20:56:45 UTC
Jared just can't seem to get a break... great chapter!

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