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moviegeek03

Broken Angel 5/?

Aug 29, 2011 15:59

Title: Broken Angel 5/?
Pairing: Jared/Jensen
Word Count: ~5700
Rating/Warnings: NC-17 for violence, sexual situations, and references to non-con(but nothing graphic)
A/N: This story is based off a prompt by the amazing imogen_lily . Thank you so much for the gorgeous banner and for letting me play with this idea! I appreciate all the help sweetie ( Read more... )

genre: hurt!jared, fandom: supernatural, fanfiction, fic: broken angel, genre: rps, pairing: jared/jensen, fandom: j2, genre: au

Comments 74

cherry916 August 29 2011, 20:08:24 UTC

Oooh very suspenseful

moviegeek03 August 29 2011, 20:16:48 UTC

Haha...yeah...I didn't want to drag things out too far lol. Thanks hun :)

claricehubert August 29 2011, 20:21:46 UTC

AGAIN?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?

WTF!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

OMG - How many times has this sob hurt poor Jared???

And Lehne is gonna use Tom as a "double agent"????

OMG - this story is getting better by the minute...

Loved the update....

More soon, PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Take care, Cla ;~}

moviegeek03 August 29 2011, 20:25:02 UTC

Awww...

Lehne has just hurt him the one time he took him and tortured him for a few days. But having him there beside him brought it all back and Jared panicked.

Tom is definitely going to be a bit of a double agent in the coming chapters and eventually be pretty important :)

Thank you again Cla!!

glimmerella August 29 2011, 20:42:36 UTC

I'm so nervous for Jared. You're really sucking me into the story.

moviegeek03 August 29 2011, 20:45:50 UTC

Hehe...thank you hun!!

dont_hate_me01 August 29 2011, 20:42:43 UTC

Oh! freaking hell!!!!!!, but let me not get ahead of myself. I need to start at the beginning.

Loved the flashback (once again), the way the boys met and how Jensen managed to clam Jared down so quickly was just so sweet.

You know why Nemo is my favorite?” she asked in a small voice.

“No…don’t think I do hun. Why is Nemo your favorite?”

“Because…Nemo’s like you.”

“What do you mean, Tessa?”

“Well…he has a messed up fin and has to swim different, just like you have’ta walk different. But he’s still really brave and saves the day. Just like you do.” - This my dearest friend, this made this chapter so freaking super special!!! I loved it ( ... )

moviegeek03 August 29 2011, 20:48:57 UTC

I love your comments lol.

The flashback and the scene w/Tessa were my favorite to write lol. My dad was talking about Nemo the other day and I remembered the bit about his fin and hoped that it would parallel enough :)

You'll definitely learn more about Tom and his importance as the chapters go :). And Jensen is definitely not going to be too happy in the next chapter lol.

Thank you again hun!! This is truly a WIP now b/c I don't have any advance chapters now.

geri August 29 2011, 20:45:54 UTC

Oh shit jared never told them Lehne did that to him from the start i was always under the impression that they knew he was the one who did that to jared oh well shit is really about to hit the fan sorry about the cusses but that just threw me. Man i can't wait for the next post to go up.

moviegeek03 August 29 2011, 20:50:59 UTC

No worries about the cussing lol. Doesn't bother me in the least.

Yeah...some people did know going into this that Jared was Lehne's surviving victim. Jensen however was not one of them. Jared's family, his friends from back then, his therapist Sam, and his own FBI team (Jim and Misha) knew.

Thanks again for reading!