This is fantastic! Darcy's sections are probably the strongest in terms of voice, but the whole thing is so darn funny and cute, and I love it to pieces.
This is really great. I had to watch a youtube video of how Apples to Apples is played, but after that I could follow this just fine, which is excellent because this is just a really sweet, cute, funny fic. I loved Steve just feeling all lost and struggling with the pop culture references, and that Coulson always wins (coupled with the reveal at the end that no one ever lets Tony win). There were some great moments - like the "Freckles Incident", and Coulson feeling bad about winning the 'heartless' card, and Darcy getting a kick out of being the judge because she can lord over superheroes. There is some really great character stuff in here :D
Very nice! I liked how you focused on how the characters' relationships to each other influenced their choices when playing the game, and also on each character's reactions to the cards that the others choose. I also liked how, instead of snippets from different Apples to Apples game sessions at different times (which is what I was expecting), you went through one whole game session till the end.
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I love this game, so this was a lot of fun to read.
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But I'm glad you liked it anyway. I wanted a lot of character moments in it, so it's good that that came across. Thanks!
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This was cute and poignant and just OMG. So many feelings. Just. Loved it. :D
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