[ONESHOT] Time-Machine Day

Apr 30, 2013 22:20

Seohyun lay curled in bed, one hand on the remote, the other hand absent-mindedly fingering a barely-eaten bowl of sweet potato cookies. Her hair lay unkempt; she was dressed in her Keroro pajamas. They hadn't been washed in a long time; it smelled faintly of sweat and tears ( Read more... )

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snccrockz May 1 2013, 04:01:57 UTC
I like how since time-machine day is done, her conscious says its ok now to call lol. Oh man, I can't believe its been around 3 years already, it feels like yesterday to me...

It's nice to see you writing here again!

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meganrhys_5 May 1 2013, 05:10:02 UTC
I want to know what happens after she places the call. Will he answer? Will they talk? What will they talk about. But I guess, you're leaving that to your readers' imaginations. =)

"Three letters, sandwiched between Jung, Nicole and Jung, Yun Ho" ---First thought was...So, she doesnt have Jung Jinwoon's number?? LOL. =. but then I realized J comes before N. Hahaha! Silly me

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anonymous May 1 2013, 06:28:06 UTC
I don't know why but tears came down on my face as I continued reading your story. It's very well written. I'm currently watching their episode again and your story made me sad that their story will end soon. I hope you could continue writing stories like this. At least, even if it's just a fictional story, you are making a lot of YongSeo lovers happy.

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ext_438763 May 1 2013, 14:25:46 UTC
long time ^^. Happy youre back. and u made hYun to make a call after 3 years:-( why wait so long. she should play with time machine earlier, hahha. But better late than not do anything ^^

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blueaddicted May 3 2013, 16:58:46 UTC
It has been a while since your last update! I was very surprised when I saw your post!

Haha, what is she going to say when he accept the call?! Gosh, it's good to leave the ending like this but will you write a sequel for this?

And Discovery of Affection, author-nim... ...

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